Story Review 4 · 6:08pm Jul 8th, 2019
Woah I'm on a roll with these, I guess I'm trying to make up for my 2-week absence.
As always This is my opinion.
WARNING-SPOILERS AHEAD
Today we are going to a pretty established author, I would love to review some of his other stories, but as of current, I am trying to perfect my ability to write reviews of chaptered stories.
Today's story is: "If you want it, Get it" by Phantom Shadow
It's just a typical day at Canterlot high school, People are being normal high school students. Soon enough, we join Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo at the vending machine, And it seems that Sweetie can't decide what she wants. Also, it should be noted that this takes place in the Equestria girls universe if you hadn't figured that out.
Scootaloo starts to get impatient after a while, Scootaloo wants to get to class, And Sweetie wants to get the perfect beverage. There is also a title drop in this conversation because, of course, there is. Scootaloo continues to push the issue, suggesting that she get it after class, or get it and drink before class. But Sweetie doesn't want to do either of these, Saying she wants to enjoy it, which is fair. They eventually get into a back and forth, or Scootaloo just says the same thing so it was pretty one-sided, Sweetie, snaps they have a short argument, And then they have a small heartfelt moment, and then Sweetie goes to buy a drink.
Overall this was a nice little story, short and to the point.
Final score 8 out of 10
You should tell the authors that you reviewed their story.
5085893
Good idea.
Thanks for the review. Glad you liked the story.
Sometimes, short and simple is the way to go
P.S. It's funny how you consider me an "established author"!
5085962
No problem man.
And the stories you have written are pretty well received, so I consider you established.