Re-written chapters are live! · 3:15am Jun 10th, 2019
That took longer than it needed to. Re-writing is a lot less fun than creating something new. Hopefully I never have to do something like that again. I included a list of changes at the bottom of this post for your convenience.
I'll probably post another story I had in the works within the next month. I don't think it'll be any longer than 10k words, and the first few chapters of part 2 of FiMTech should be released a week or so afterward since I've already got that written. It's so difficult to find the energy to write now that I have a job.
EDITS
Prologue
Re-written from scratch, new character perspective.
Chapter 1
Re-written from scratch, minor scene changes.
Chapter 2
Re-written from scratch, minor scene changes
Chapter 3
Minor scene changes, heavy grammar changes
Chapter 4
Minor scene changes, heavy grammar changes
Chapter 5
Grammar changes
Chapter 6
Grammar changes
Chapter 7
Minor grammar changes
Chapter 8
Minor grammar changes
Chapter 9
Minor grammar changes
Chapter 10
Minor grammar changes
Chapter 11
Minor grammar changes
The End of the Beginning
Minor Grammar changes
Epilogue
No changes
