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  • 7 weeks
    The heraldry of Ravenclaw

    Once upon a time Heraldry had been a hobby of mine.

    OK, so this bit of rambling was inspired by speculation about the Ravenclaw heraldic blazon. Originally the shield was described as a bronze eagle on a blue field.

    Blue and gold? Or is it blue and brown? Not to mention considerable division as to if it's an eagle or a raven.

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  • 8 weeks
    What did I write?

    OK, so I'm reading through an abandoned story when I find this:

    “Do you know how to use a toilet?”

    “Ah, you sit, do yer business, and then pull the leaver.”

    “Which one?”

    “Which one?” Cirrus had never heard of a toilet with more than one lever on it. Looking at what she presumed to be the toilet found that it looked a bit like a captains chair with multiple buttons.

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  • 9 weeks
    What links the Deathly Hallows.

    OK, so I was watching a video on fan theories and thought I'd share one of my comments here. One theory is that Harry's Invisibility Cloak was a piece of the Veil... which really makes no sense to my way of thinking. They were also speculating on the connection between the three hallows.

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  • 10 weeks
    Chapters ready to go so far...

    As of this morning there are 12 chapters ready to go.

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    8 comments · 92 views
  • 21 weeks
    Agent's of Discord

    Finished and posted up to the end of Book One of the Harry Potter series.

    I will not be starting a new book/sequel at this time. All future posts will be added to Agents of Discord. Coming up, Summer Vacation, and what a vacation it's going to be.

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2019

Chapter delay · 1:03am Apr 21st, 2019

It's not looking like I'm going to be posting a new chapter right away. After having basically been told my stuff is trash, I've been going back over old stuff starting with chapter one of Ponies in Hogwarts to see how I might make it a little better, find things that really need to be fixed, and hopefully not introduce more mistakes. But lets be honest, we've all seen far worse then what I've offered. For the most part I'll ignore other people's mistakes because I know it's hard to find everything. As for my writing style, I can only imagine how readers would react to no quotes at all. And yes, that's a recognized writing style as well. But then I'd have to be a professional writer to pull that off. I'm just me. No readers, no editors, just me. :fluttershysad:

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Chin up, those that told you such things may have pointed out a few issues, but you have been doing a great job and the fact that you've done it without editors! Simply amazing, truth be told, your stories have gone under appreciated and that truly is a shame. Keep doing the great work that you do.

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No problem, just calling it as I see it.

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I agree your story series is already pretty high quality that troll needs to keep his negativity away from fan fiction if he continues to be a problem ill report him. Your writing style is no issue just a few misspelled words. The story itself is really good and that troll probably didn't even read the descriptions of your stories. Ignore those who think they are entitled to tell you how to tell your story it is after all fan fiction and does not have to be perfect. Just slowly accumulate experience it is no rush.

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See, I am not the only one who believes in you!

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Thank you for supporting Aiko!

Thanks. The part that bugged me the most was the fact that some of what they'd said was legit... sort of. Yes, I've got wrong words I fix em when I spot them, and yes it can be hard to tell who's speaking if I've gone to many paragraphs without explicitly stating who's speaking. I've seen worse. I've removed the forth wall break from the first chapter. It was kind of jarring. Especially for a person who hasn't realized a story about a girl, who is a pony who turns into a fox who has a pet Nightmare Moon, isn't intended to be taken too seriously. :facehoof:

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