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EchoWing


Geek boy, aspiring writer, and proud Brony with a story to tell.

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  • Sunday
    Adulting is hard.

    Buying a house is hard. Just saying that right now.

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  • Thursday
    So some minor improvements.

    We have a new person at work, and they appear to be getting used to the job quite quickly. My phone, meanwhile, has been fixed, and I have gone to great effort to thank my current phone provider for having so much better customer service than my previous provider.

    Househunting is still ongoing, but even that appears to be making some positive progress.

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    6 comments · 44 views
  • 1 week
    I don't think it's getting better.

    So the good news is that we have a new supervisor at my job. The bad news is that one, the new supervisor is sick with something and her doctors are failing to help her get better, and two, the job is taking its sweet time hiring anyone new. This coupled with various unforeseen factors led to last week being a pain in the hindquarters at work. Plus, my househunting isn't going well, and my phone

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  • 3 weeks
    I think my job is trying to give me PTSD.

    I was awoken by a phone call this morning. Work asked me to come in, as things were crazy. I did so, was there from around 9:30 AM to 6PM. Worked without a lunch break, I might add.

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  • 3 weeks
    The Moral Event Horizon.

    Gonna discuss another trope today in relation to the Quiververse. In this case, it's the Moral Event Horizon. In simple terms, this is the point a character passes that forever marks them as EVIL and potentially irredeemable. TVTropes itself lists a few examples from FiM, and I won't repeat them here...though I will say that

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Feb
3rd
2019

Well, there's some effort wasted. · 2:46am Feb 3rd, 2019

Well, I wrote a chunk for the fifth chapter for Many Happy Reunions yesterday, and after considering it and thinking it over...I've cut it. Not the first time that's happened, I had a chunk planned for the second chapter that was ultimately cut, and I think it's for the best, but still, I hate feeling like I've gone to a lot of work for nothing.

Odd tidbits from that cut bit will likely make it into the story, however, so there's that. And what I'm replacing it with should be much better.

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Comments ( 5 )

Oh well. But hey, I still look forward to seeing what will come of it in the future. ^^

RQK

It happens. There have been points where I’ve scrapped several paragraphs because they just weren’t working out. Of course, I tend to agonize over stuff as I’m writing it so instances where I’m actually scrapping large volumes of text are rare.

There was one time where I did scrap about 66k words but it was for some original fiction I’ll hopefully finish some day.

5007027
And I'm looking forward to writing it. Just hoping that I can find the time. Hopefully my work schedule will ease up after the Super Bowl, but we'll see.

5007032
In this case it was less the segment not working out, and more the actions of the characters involved coming across as needlessly cruel against other characters. If a character doesn't come across as consistent to me, I know that what they do (or fail to do, whichever) will bother my readers. Fine line between karma and Disproportionate Retribution.

Also, yikes. I applaud the dedication to the craft, but still, yikes.

I wouldn't look at it as effort wasted at all personally. It very well may have been that you dodn't catch what was wrong until after you put it down into words if you will. Or at the least you weren't convinced that it wasn't right until after you did such.

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...that is a better way to look at it, thanks.

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