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  • Friday
    [FEATURE BOX] Whelp its the AM after I've posted a couple of th...SWEET CELESTIA!!!

    Quite literally I was NOT expecting this! You're all awesome and I can't thank you enough for enjoying my writing this much!

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  • 28 weeks
    [NEW FIC] Back to writing ponies! (...sorta)

    tl;dr - I put ponies in another fic, but only for a few chapters

    So, real quick, minor confession...this fic is actually one of my oldest, and it's not on this site.

    Hey, easy, easy, let me explain.

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  • 50 weeks
    [UPDATE] It's like being nibbled to death by cats

    This chapter is a straight up continuation of the previous chapter, and there's literally zero time skip, unlike most of my chapters in this fic. So much so, in fact, that what had originally been two separate chapters (Gilda fights Sunset, sleepover happens) had to be combined into one because the "Gilda fights Sunset" chapter was going to be too long. It was during the

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  • 62 weeks
    [UPDATE] Yes, you saw that right, new chapter

    Not much to say about this one that the notes at the bottom of the chapter itself don't already say. Obviously, my health is much better and my sleep is improving to the point where I'm not having to take medication for it nearly as often. Work is going pretty good (I'll post about that at some point, it deserves its own post) and I've gotten HYPER into The Lost Tomb, which if you haven't read it

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  • 84 weeks
    [UPDATE] When you get medical confirmation...

    So I've said in my rather sporadic updates that I've been going through a lot, and I believe I've mentioned that the things that have been happening have been rather more draining on the ol' spoons than I otherwise expected.

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Nov
9th
2018

[THE LIST] OK, so not NSFW, per se, but does deal with controversial topics · 3:23pm Nov 9th, 2018

This list is not about my favorite stories of all time. That's my favorites list and it's nearly 200 fics strong. The thing is, I've got high standards for my favorites list. It's got to be a completed fic. I can't have said at any time during the reading of it that I would rather be reading (or doing) something else. It's got to be high quality, and if it doesn't follow tried, tested, and true formulas for creating a successful narrative work, it's got a damn good reason and pulls it off with flying colors. Sometimes, however, there's a fic that I'd like to recommend to people, but it's just not finished yet. Maybe it doesn't quite merit my favorites list but it does something unique and interesting and is worth more attention than it's getting. Perhaps it's just not something that ever reaches the feature box, so most people never hear about it.

The List is about stand-out works that deserve more love, for whatever reason. In addition to general reviews of the fics, these blog posts will tell why I picked a particular story and highlight any features the reader should look out for. Spoilers will be appropriately marked, so you'll be able to read my reviews with confidence that you'll be able to read the story itself and experience the same surprise and delight I did when I first found it.

Also, authors and fans of works will be able to submit stories. Your particular selection may not make it onto the list, and the more information you give me for why you think it should be featured, the more likely I'll be to read and post it. To submit a fiction, simply PM me through FiMFiction's link on my profile.

The list can be found here: Princess Columbia's List

No spell for that
by
Jeweled Pen

Premise
Twilight Sparkle encounters a student at her alma mater that causes her to question some of her assumptions about the world, her studies, and how she treats others.
Meanwhile, a filly who wasn't born one is desperate to find some way to simply be who she knows herself to be.

Princess Columbia's Synopsis
Reading this fic was kinda painful for me, because so much of my own struggle was reflected in the story of Drifting Petal, and I actually had to put on my Big Girl panties in order to read this in such a way as to be able to properly review it. (I'd made the mistake of allowing my feels to overwhelm my writing sense before back in the heyday of the Ranma 1/2 fandom's prominence with the fic, "The Clothes Make the..." only to come back to it a couple years later and realize the writing itself was just...dreck. Decent plot points, spent too much time yanking the emotional chain to pay attention to the actual story)

The writing on this one is...not professional. It's not nearly as tight as it should be and the focus jumping from Twilight to Drifting Petal very abruptly will be very jarring if you're not expecting it, because there's not really a good transition or even a narrative reason to do so. Is it Twilight's story, or Drifting's story? Answer is...not sure yet. Both characters have great starts to complete story arcs and I eagerly await seeing what happens for both. I'd really like to see Twilight interacting directly with both Celestia and Luna, and a cameo from the Crystal Imperial Royal Family would be wonderful as Drifting is struggling with figuring out her own feelings when it comes to relationships.

I will say that the reader should hang on through the sections featuring Drifting's parents (specifically her mom) and therapist. While critical to the story they're a bit painful to read.


Why am I highlighting this fic?
There's just not enough good fics that feature a trans character. While there's epic crap-tons of trans-centric works, the vast bulk of them get stuck in the "I'm trans, poor me" phase and don't move on no matter how badly they need to. I think this is the same problem most romance fiction has; when the central feature of the story is the romance/trans-experience, it's gotta be stretched out to ridiculous length to have anything there.

The best bad example of this that I can think of off the top of my head is "The Saga of Tuck." There's nothing wrong with the story, per se, though I think the only reason it wound up being as popular and (in)famous as it is was due entirely to the fact that, at the time it was written, there just wasn't anything else worth reading, so when something came along that was decently well written, had a good plot and fleshed out characters, and dealt with actual real-life issues (as opposed to the fetish-centric fiction that was all you could find for trans-characters at the time), that the fact that the story turned into a stagnant slog through a Chocolate War-esque narrative nightmare was ignored.

Back to this fic; Twilight feels real, as do the ponies around her. Her surprise, reactions, and overall accepting nature as The Princess of Friendship plus her drive to learn more with an open mind resemble her on-screen version magnificently, and this leads to hilarious interactions. The fashionista- and spa-ponies exposure to trans-ponies feels real, and Starlight Glimmer's reaction (this is in Ch.1, so I don't consider it a spoiler) makes perfect sense.

What makes this fic particularly good?
The catharsis, in both the classical and modern senses of the word. Catharsis was originally meant as a way to describe the playwright's ability to extract the correct emotional response from the audience for the scene being written and performed, and over the centuries has come to mean the author/playwright/actor being able to portray the intended emotion because they actually feel the emotion in question, often in a therapeutic way, as they're relating it to the audience. I'm not reading tea leaves on this, btw, the author explains in the author's notes at the end of a couple of chapters that she's writing the story as catharsis regarding her own experience as a transwoman.

Who would like this fic?
Transwomen, naturally. Additionally, anyone who enjoys Twilight tripping over her own nerdery to comedic effect.

Does the author monetize?*
Yes! Go visit their profile for commission information and shower them with filthy lucre!

Endorsement on Princess Columbia's List is an endorsement of the selected work of fiction only and is not intended to endorse the creator of the work in any other way.

* Why highlight whether the author monetizes their work? By providing renumeration to the author, you often get the opportunity to request certain works be given higher priority. Additionally, when a person is able to get paid for their passion on their terms, it can often allow them to cut out things that otherwise distract from said passion, like a day job. Please support your content creators!

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