Retcon · 1:35pm Sep 13th, 2018
I hate the idea of retconing what I have already written, but it seems that I might really need to. I'm considering cutting chapters 69, 70, and the epilogue from Pandemic: What you are Meant to Be. The events will still stand, but they will be moved offscreen to what is going on in Pandemic: Picking up the Pieces. I would then expand chapter 68 to give it an "end" at the point.
Suit your self my friend
It's your story and nobody can tell you what to do
4936921
Yes
Do what you want with your story, but I don't understand why you feel the need for a retcon.
4937006
It isn't a full recon as the events still happen. It was just a very upsetting and disturbing way to end the last story. The sequel actually backtracks a bit in time slightly so as it stood the event happened kind of twice between the two stories. Just the sequel moves it "off-screen" with the event being discussed and repercussions being a driving part of part of the narrative.
4937014
I see.
See my reply to your PM. Nut shell, I wouldn't change it.