Let's try this again.... · 10:57pm Jun 6th, 2018
Okay, I said I received the messages, yes. I did not say it would turn into something bad. A love scene? I did one in the story, nothing bad at all except a nicely short thing that let you know they loved each other. My definition of 'hot' is very different from a lot of folks.
You should learn to trust me. If you've read this far, you'd know I wouldn't do anything to degrade what I have wrought. I believe love is love, but it doesn't have to be explicit. Should there be love scenes? Yes! "Those' kind of scenes? No, sorry, won't do it. I should have made it plainer. I was trying to be polite in a way and it failed.
My fault for not being more clear. I apologize for that, it was MY fault for not saying the right things. If anyone is to blame, its me.
Don't give up folks.
NFire
That is entirely alright and your prerogative! Part of me would still love to thrill and read through the responses to everything, but it makes perfect sense. I'm detail oriented, myself, and when I write I don't hold back the erotic moments because of my love of detail and showing how characters react to certain stimuli and life changing events. Like the first time a Bolo made love. You expressed it perfectly and exquisitely, and they clearly had a wonderful time of it. I doubt Applejack ever has the chance to feel needful now that Crusader is an artificial life form once again. I just like the physical and emotional aspect of it all. Not 'for getting someone else's rocks off' but just because its a joy to write.
We all have our own ways of writing, and yours is exquisite. So looking forward to more chapters of Legacy.
(Still wish Applejack had gotten pregnant though. I'm just sappy and cliche like that.)
4877786 The future holds many things. Its a story that goes on. So many magical things happen in Equestria, who knows? And thank you for the kind response. Very much. That does not mean I'm not 1500 words into a chapter with lots of love in it, and I'll be posting it soon. Just a side story I thought would be nice while writing more of the arc we're in :)
It’s your story to express how you want. Write what you want and feel how it should be written. End of story.
Forget the haters.
Indeed, steamy is nice but it's not always required. Keep doing you.
Wait, there's more than one definition of 'hot'? I thought it was just something radiating excess energy, thermal or otherwise...
Also, good work! The latest burst of chapters is going to keep me busy for a while.
4877866 Will do, and thank you :)
4877949 I see what ya did there..smart pony :P
one last bit on the monster world. The Concordiat did the very best it could technologically against what ever was killing the colonists. I have a question. Suppose the answer was Spiritual rather than Technological? Would it have mattered if they had wiped lamb's blood on the doorway of every home, as was described in the Bible Passover? All the speculation and none of this was tried...
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Warpy shit happened. We Exterminatus and ask questions later.
4877994 The society as a whole moved away from that as solutions. The Concordiat was high technology, and to them, as possibly others, anything to do with that would have been nonsense. So they turned to scientists, technologists, AI's for an answer and came up empty. At least that's my take on the society as a whole, though I am sure some may have thought of it, it wasn't tried because it would have been looked upon as superstitious nonsense in most people's eyes. My opinion, nothing meant against anyone's religion :)
4878020 I laughed harder than I should have at that :)