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  • 246 weeks
    Update

    Hey, I wanted to give you all a heads up.

    So this next chapter is a pretty major one for the story - on the level of the Gourd Fest, Twilight and Starlight in the snow, and the final cluster of 4-6.

    As such, I've been taking my time and am 7k words in and I know it's going to be more than double that.

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  • 249 weeks
    So I watched the last several episodes...

    It was such a cute ending. Very nostalgic-feeling. Didn't cry, but it made me reflect on the show that has been a constant in my life since spring of 2012.

    If you've heard any controversy about it, don't heed it any concern. It's the squalling of children unhappy that the story isn't what they wanted it to be - as it has been every season.

    10 comments · 575 views
  • 261 weeks
    Update! Where I've been + The Broken Bond

    This will be quick.

    Sorry I've been quiet as of late everybody! I graduated University and have been preparing to move to Las Vegas in about a week. Big changes! Big... big changes...

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    2 comments · 638 views
  • 271 weeks
    It's the endgame, y'all

    That was a killer premiere. Honestly, Grogar has this gravitas to him, this insight and perspective that's already established him, in my mind, as a terrifying MLP villain. Being the source of everything evil, all the monsters we've seen, it's all on him. And that voice and the design? Oh! I love this villain.

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  • 273 weeks
    Last chapter of act 4 is finally finished

    At 44K words and 103 single-spaced pages on gdocs, the next chapter of 'The Broken Bond' is at last finished, and ho boy, a lot happens. I just need to edit it - expect it Saturday if not tomorrow. Thank you all for being patient with me.

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Mar
5th
2018

[The Broken Bond] The Witches of Flutter Valley · 7:29pm Mar 5th, 2018

For those of you who aren't in the know, these are who they are:

They're jokey characters from the first generation of My Little Pony.

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Have you heard the news?

4810634
Step inside! Run and hide!
Nothing can stop-

THE SMOOZE!

I remember this they played it on the hub once then stopped when they changed the logo love the movie hate that my grandma disliked things with magic in it:ajbemused:

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If you remember from the first chapter, that oily goop Starlight flew over as opposed to walking through was actually the Smooze. She thinks she sees it twitch at one point, before returning to stillness.


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I've not seen it to be honest, only the scenes with the Witches (that song between Reeka and Draggle is fun). As you can see, they're quite... quite different in The Broken Bond.

So you managed to turn these cookey, dorky crazy ladies with weird hair into eldritch abominations above and beyond even Discord. Huh, yep...not bad at all. I have to applaud you on that one.

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God I can't wait to tell their story. :yay:But it's so far away...:raritycry:

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Aside from the Smooze song, this is all you really ever need to watch from the original movie:

(Jump to 1:48 seconds to skip the buildup)

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I’m an aficionado of terrible cartoons, and there is so much going on in this scene. The awful song, the awful singing, the complete insanity of whatever the fuck is happening with Lickety Split’s bag of holding...

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I know exactly how you feel. Wind Rider doesn't come into Secret of Motherhood was AGES yet...and I just added something big. Ugh... at least when you get to it you know that it'll be absolutely worth it,

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I already knew Wind Rider was Starlight's husbando, unless you're referring to him coming in later, which in that case, I was assuming and hoping for it. I wanna see Rainbow Dash tear him a new one.

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Yeah, he'll actually make an appearance and yes he will be torn a new one. Starlight just has a lot of crap to go through first, especially given what happened in the latest chapter. Hehehe. If she faced him right now she would literally turn him into a pile of goop... which would be cathartic but would land her in a dungeon for a millennium or two.

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I blame classical (Pavlovian) conditioning.

Yup, just how you described them!

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If you're referring to the Smooze moving in reaction to Starlight's presence, then you're right. It's been thousands and thousands of years without even needing to move. The sudden appearance of a living organism, a pony no less, rouses it from its hibernation.

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Except way more physically appalling and mashed together with these lovely gals:
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There's a fantastic review of this movie that points out the Smooze is basically a Grey Goo, and in many ways the most powerful and terrifying enemy ever shown in the MLP series. Of course, now Thorax and his buddies could just Utter-Flutter it...

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I was referring to me witnessing the Witches of Flutter Valley inciting recital of (Nothing Can Stop) The Smooze. However, I suppose I can see what you mean.

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