Why To Love a Queen will be Redone, and how Sorry isn't Enough came to be! · 9:40am Feb 23rd, 2018
As the title says, the story To Love a Queen will be redone and many MANY changes will happen to the story. it doesn't mean that I am putting down the story quite yet from my story list, I will keep it up for people to enjoy until I am good and ready to start it up once more.
After now having a good idea on what I would want with the story, now knowing that Anthro ponies will be easier for me to write then with them being on all fours, and a better understand on what I want to write for the story, I can safety say that To Love a Queen will be much more smoother and I will be working to find a editor BEFORE the first chapter is even release to the public.
Before I do start on the story I want to work on the current story I have going on Sorry Isn't Enough. And the reason I am writing this is because I've made people asking me when the next update of TLAQ would be release. one even demanding a update for the story.
Thank you for everyone that has taken interest in my work, and it does me proud that some people are willing to sit down and LIKE my story. some may not like them, many more enjoy them, and it always does me a great pleasure when I read the comments. though I never answer back to a lot of them, it's mostly because of me worrying that I would spoil anything about the story and what I would REAL love to say to the fans at times.
TLAQ is a story that I adore and spent many of hours writing it, but the issues that I had with it is that I barely did any sort of planning for the story and each chapter was just what I wrote on the spot, that's why many chapters didn't seem to make sense at all. for the longest time I was wondering how I would bring Chrysilis into the mix. at one point I was going to make it where she just sort of gets rid of the mare the MC was dating and took her place much like Princess Cadence was replaced and she would soon fall for him and show herself.
Another time I was gonna make it where it was nothing but a coma induce dream, and a nurse that cared for him had the voice and sort of 'act' of chrysalis. Like I said...not a lot of planning went into it.
it was only after the MC was kidnapped by the Diamond Dogs did I really start to plan because I realized how much of a OP I was making my character now, convicting Princess Luna to give Chrysalis a chance, having two mare friends without any sort of trouble going on. I always claimed to hate that, and here I was, writing it and making my character the typical 'I'm the MC I can do anything!'
That's when I started to write Sorry isn't Enough. I wanted a fresh start on something to ease my mind, try something I didn't think a lot of people do. Course I've always seen stories where humans were transported to Equestria, and they ether knew the place because of the show, comics or fanfictions. or they just were okay with being transported with no idea of the thought if they could return back home.
sure I love those stories, my fav being Element of Humanity or another Your Human and You. Two very different stories...SPOILERS FOR STORY A SMALL ONE BUT TRY TO SKIP THIS PART! But both humans decided to want to stay there when given the chance to go home.
I always thought to myself, why not make a story where the human was forcefully brought to the pony world much like the two...but he didn't like it at first, a story where even a great power and wise pony like Celestia fucked it up and not Twilight for once. A backward world where in pony kind, it's a female world and not a man world like in the human world. I wanted to try and break many cliché in many HIE stories and so far I think I am doing great. SIE is not even halfway done and I have many more ideas for it before it's done. and when it is, and I am ready. To Love a Queen will make a comeback. just please, wait for it.
-Eragon13666
is the original gonna stay up, or is it gonna be deleted?
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If people want it to stay up I will allow it to stay up
Awww.... i really liked to love a Queen.... i most humble request and BEG you to leave the original up
after several hours of chatting about TLAQ you know i love this story.
we even talked about this re boot and i agreed with your thinking i am just hoping you stay with the orgional plans
well i a am a fan of SNE ( sorry not enough) but i would like to see the parents meet the human....
but, do as you see fit, they are after all your story and your characters.
but if there is a DEMAND well i must see if it is..................................
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SIN (sorry isn't enough) next chapter the MC meets girlfriend family so stay tune
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lol sorry for that .... what channel?
( tune radio....
So...Reverse-gender roles equestria then? I'm cool with this. There's a group for that now,woefully small sadly.
any new on SNE???
just asking???
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Working on the chapter now, nearly at 3000 words I want the chapter to be at least 4000 or 5000 and then off to the editors
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GTK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!