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Firesight


I'm an IT Brony who writes stories based on a show for 8-year old girls whose content is meant for anything but 8-year old girls.

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  • Thursday
    Midnight Rising update; Feathered Hearts C&C teaser...

    Hey, folks. Here’s my weekly writing update. I’m tagging this as C&C since that’s what the teaser below is about, but the blog is about both it and Unleash the Magic - Midnight Rising.

    Unleash the Magic - Midnight Rising

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  • 1 week
    Prereader verdict on new Midnight Rising chapter is in...

    And unfortunately, that verdict is unanimous:

    Complaints were: too meta, hard to follow, does nothing to advance the plot, and potentially makes things worse while trying to fix them.

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  • 2 weeks
    Still waiting on Midnight Rising prereads...

    Which are particularly important this time, because the first preread I got back was negative. As it came from AJ_Aficionado, whose opinions I particularly value mostly because he’s more interested in the story than the sex, I tend to give what he said about it credence but still want to hear from everyone else before I start making changes to the new chapter.

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  • 3 weeks
    Mind changed on removing the griffon arc from Midnight Rising + teaser

    After receiving pleas from multiple readers to keep the Enter the Griffon chapters in place, I have decided to do so and go with my original plan, which was to simply offer new readers the chance

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  • 3 weeks
    One final thing...

    I have been advised by no less an authority than CHS acting Vice-Principal Ms. Cheerilee to use the upcoming Midnight Rising chapter as strictly a recap to relaunch the story, and not get into Lemon Zest until the following chapter, when I can devote a full entry to it without any split in focus. No, really. She did. You’ll see what I mean when the chapter launches, but basically, I’m

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Dec
19th
2017

TLaTU Part 37 in the books... · 3:49pm Dec 19th, 2017

Well, folks... I'm calling the latest and craziest TLaTU chapter a success. Three new likes, and TLaTU part 37 was certainly a popular chapter by read count. It's been very well-received thus far--doubly so for it being the wildest thing I've written yet! I have to admit I had some trepidation about how well it would go over, but it turned out I needn't have worried. I was also pleasantly surprised by how eager folks seemed for the ending, even after everything that had already come. I knew Pinkemana was popular with a couple of my prereaders, but I didn't realize that it was shared by so many others! :pinkiecrazy:

Her chapter is yet to come, but in the meantime, I wanted to let readers know two things: first, I fleshed out and enhanced the Rainbow scenes towards the end of the chapter more because, upon reflection, I didn't think I quite sold her reaction in the aftermath. So I invite everyone to give those revamped paragraphs a look and let me know what you think. More changes may be coming as I continue to tweak things, and if any major ones are made, I'll of course let everyone know.

Secondly, and this is something I meant to discuss in my blog post last week, was that I'm thinking about retconning Starswirl's appearance in the final chapter trials to mesh more with his new show canon we saw in the season finale. I don't think I'd go strictly with the show version, but perhaps the grudge he bears against The Nightmare has something to do with Stygian's fall and the actions he and his fellow 'pillars' were eventually forced to take. Perhaps the Nightmare corrupted Stygian to turn him into the Pony of Shadows, and perhaps he and his friends were forced to sacrifice themselves somewhat more permanently than in the show to stop her. Just random food for thought, and I'll certainly welcome any ideas folks have on it.

The next chapter I'm writing is an Unleash the Magic - Nightmare Night one, which I invite all to read if you haven't already. Hey, if you enjoyed the magic-fueled sex here or in the original Unleash the Magic, you should really like it there! I will attempt to release the Pinkemana chapter within a month, but I do also want to get another Into the Storm: The Rise of Firefly chapter written beforehand.

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