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Firesight


I'm an IT Brony who writes stories based on a show for 8-year old girls whose content is meant for anything but 8-year old girls.

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  • 3 weeks
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  • 4 weeks
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Oct
21st
2017

Unleash the Magic - Nightmare Night: teaser #1 · 8:30pm Oct 21st, 2017

A day late, but not a dollar short. Current progress report is that the prologue plus first two chapters are written, with the third chapter underway and to be finished tomorrow. As I want at least five chapters ready to go, we are on track for a pre-Halloween release!

Here’s the promised teaser:


“So, do they celebrate Nightmare Night on the other side of the portal, Twilight?” Rainbow Dash asked as the headed out in costume for Town Hall at dusk, which was already decorated and readied for the occasion, with game and vendor stalls set up as well as a statue of Nightmare Moon erected for foals to leave candy offerings at.

“They do, but… they call it ‘Halloween’,” Twilight remembered, having already turned down an invitation from Sunset Shimmer to cross over and experience it from their side, explaining that she’d already made plans here and had to act as master of ceremonies for the Ponyville Nightmare Night festival as the town’s resident princess.

“Howl-o-ween?” Trixie made a face as she trailed behind, walking alongside Starlight. “What a strange name. So what customs do those hairless apes have for it?”

“Trixie!” Starlight scolded, having already spent several days on that side of the portal and coming to appreciate its benefits and the human counterparts of Twilight and her friends quite readily. Their own ‘magic’ is pretty amazing… she conceded as she remembered what their ‘technology’ could do, having done everything from ride in massive motorized carriages that could go quite fast to eat meat and play video games. And you know, I really WOULD like to have more of that ‘gelato’… and preferably not lose two scoops of it this time! she decided, as one of the benefits of a human palate, she had discovered, was a greater sensitivity to sweet things.

But Twilight was unperturbed. “Apparently, the same ones we do, except the origins of it are markedly different than here…” she then launched into a lecture detailing the holiday’s history on on the human world, which Trixie immediately tuned out as they approached the festival grounds.

“So when do I get to cross over and visit this human ‘Canterlot’ with you?” Trixie asked Starlight, who chuckled and shook her head.

“We’ve been through this already, Trixie. It’s dangerous for you to cross over because unlike me, you have a human counterpart there!” Starlight reminded her, magically shifting the arrow and quiver on the back of her unicorn soldier costume to make them more comfortable.

“But so does she!” the showmare pouted, motioning towards Twilight.

“Yeah, well, she’s... different…” was all Starlight could immediately manage. “She brought the human element bearers together, she helped saved their world twice from magical threats…”

“And she’s got a human coltfriend!” Pinkie Pie piped up from ahead of them, causing Twilight to immediately blush and the others to giggle. “His name’s Flash Sentry, and she sneaks over to see him several times a month!”

“A human coltfriend? Ooooo…” Trixie leered at Twilight, who blushed again, now enduring the good-natured ribbing of her friends over him. “So how well does he rut, Sparkle?”

She meant it as a joke, but was surprised when Rarity repeated the question eagerly. “Yes! Do tell! How well?”

“Girls, please…” Twilight was now quite red in the cheeks but never lost her smile. “We’ve fooled around a bit, but we’ve only outright rutted once so far, and…”

“And you did it dolphin-style!” Rainbow Dash did a loop in the air, calling Twilight to give a very Fluttershy-type eep! “Now that’s kinky!”

“Belly-to-belly, Sparkle? Really?” Trixie stuck out her tongue and wasn’t entirely teasing about it. “Trixie didn’t think you were that kind of mare!”

“Mare, no. But woman? Yes!” Twilight finally managed. “Believe me, I was surprised too, but… turns out it’s what they do when they mate! Along with a whole bunch of other things…” she finished in a rather quiet voice, her eyes growing distant, lost in memories of the act until she walked right into a lightpost, to the laughter of her friends.

“So have you met this ‘other’ Twilight? What’s she like?” Trixie asked Starlight, deciding that the news of her rival’s otherworldly love life would provide ample opportunities for teasing later.

“Very different… yet in some ways, much the same,” she shrugged. “They’re both bookworms and both great friends, but the other Twilight is much more buttoned-up and wears glasses. She even wears her mane differently.”

“And I would so like to try that style out on you, darling!” Rarity removed Twilight’s detective hat and experimentally put her hair in her counterpart’s configuration.

“That’s okay, Rarity, really,” Twilight told her, not at all comfortable with thoughts of her human doppelganger. “In all honesty, I’d prefer that we be different…” Especially after what Sunset told me my counterpart DID! she shivered, amazed and appalled at the story her pony-turned-human friend had related, about how her world’s Twilight had been overwhelmed by magic absorbed from Equestria and turned into a creature called Midnight Sparkle, who then turned the Friendship Games between Canterlot High and a rival school into her sexual playpen, taking out years of frustration and loneliness on her human classmates and even ripping open portals into Equestria.

Worse, she’d nearly collapsed the already-frayed boundaries between the worlds in the process, weakened as they were by all the time travel she’d been doing as she tried to stop Starlight. I really don’t know what happened to turn ‘Sci-Twi’ into that… thing... but I’m sure glad I don’t have anything like THAT in me!

“Well, now I really want to go! For even if another me is there, what could be better than two Trixies?” the showmare asked, giving Starlight’s flank a bump, causing Starlight to nearly choke on her cupcake.

“I’m not sure I could take two Trixies!” she exclaimed, but returned the gesture all the same. For despite all her flaws, she truly did like her showmare friend, and was happy to help her realize her considerable but woefully undeveloped magical potential.

“Well. Trixie has to go to her wagon and get her stage ready for her Nightmare Night show. So can I trust you to keep out of trouble, Starlight?” Trixie asked.

Trust ME to keep out of trouble? She gave her friend an incredulous look before she realized Trixie was teasing. “Promise. And I’ll be there for your show, too!”

“You’d better!” Trixie told her, stealing a quick kiss from her before teleporting away. It was a feat she’d only mastered recently under Starlight’s tutelage but was now only too happy to show off. And in return, Trixie had been teaching Starlight some things of her own; things Starlight had, to her surprise, been only too happy to learn! Come to think of it, might even be fun to spend some time together in costume after the show and do a little role-playing… she smiled as her mind immediately went in various kinky directions of its own.

“So, ya comin’, Starlight?” Applejack called back to her, snapping her out of her suddenly heady thoughts and making her realize they’d reached the town square, which was already filled with ponies, both parents and foals. “Looks like the entire town’s out here now!”

All but one… she reminded herself, her mind casting back to the story she’d been told about the previous year’s Nightmare Night. “Actually… go on ahead, girls,” she invited. “I’ll catch up later. I won’t be gone long, but there’s somepony I’d like to go visit first…” she told them, and teleported away before they could ask who.


There will be one and possibly two more teasers before launch. Just innuendoes here, but trust me, there’ll be a lot more than that before long! Get hype, folks! Unleash the Magic - Nightmare Night is coming!

Comments ( 4 )

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Also this:

“And she’s got a human coltfriend!” Pinkie Pie piped up from ahead of them, causing Twilight to immediately blush and the others to giggle. “His name’s Flash Sentry, and she sneaks over to see him several times a month!”

I'm ok with this....

, can't wait to see how kinky this'll be.

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Good to hear! And I’ll have more to say about this later, but I decided I dumped on Flash badly enough in the last story that he needed some love in this one. So there it is.

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I wouldn’t worry too much! The only thing is that I want to use some different kinks and scenarios that will set this story apart from the previous one. Such as? Stay tuned...

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Good to know, I actually hope we get to see little bits of this relationship later on, poor guy needs more love...

Also, if you're interested I'd be more than willing to share a few ideas...

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