Interrogation Rewrite

Can someone please rewrite this story!? https://www.fimfiction.net/story/364158/interrogation

Comments

[TheMajorTechie]

I could try, but let's remove the tickling, maybe. That'd allow for a revised plot with some more story packed in.

[TheEvilCookie]

4692057 But that's whole point of the story....

[The Crazy Cazadore]

4692063
Replace tickling with vigorous hug squishing.

[TheEvilCookie]

4692068 But then it would be a hug squishing fic not a tickle fic are we seriously suggesting this this is the only way to fix Interrogation?

[The Crazy Cazadore]

4692069
No I was just recommending something you could replace it with. Your lucky I didn't suggest what first popped into my mind.

[TheEvilCookie]

4692070 Thats alright. So nobody can rewrite it the way that it was written before? It was meant to be a tickle fic can't it be rewritten like that as well

[TheMajorTechie]

4692063
I know, it's just that it makes the story a bit absurd. I could try, but there's no guarantee that it'd turn out well.

[TheEvilCookie]

4692089 I'm sure it will be at least a little bit better than what I have right now unless you can tell me what the rewrite could involve if it doesn't involve tickling then I might consider it the way you offered the rewrite but I have to know

[TheMajorTechie]

4692091
I could possibly still include the tickling, but it'd be VERY hard to pull off a successful story based on a plot like that. Once again, I can't guarantee a good outcome for this if I rewrite.

[TheEvilCookie]

4692112 Okay thanks! But if you think it could do without the tickling then you can do that to I'm now curious as to how it would work without the tickling plot element, (I did like the vigorous hug squishing idea from https://www.fimfiction.net/user/242481/The+Crazy+Cazadore
So I'm open to any other idea you have

[TheMajorTechie]

4692118
I'll try when I get the time.

[TheEvilCookie]

4692139 Okay!