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The Sentient Cloud


I'm The Sentient Cloud, a now-retired fanfiction writer from New Zealand. If you're looking at this, then you've probably already found your way to either "The Piano Man" or "Those Who Came Before".

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  • 529 weeks
    All Clouds Dissipate (Retirement)

    Catchy title, right? Right. Moving on:

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  • 560 weeks
    Checking In

    Some of you may have noticed a large lack of... well, anything, recently.

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  • 571 weeks
    Updates on /everything/

    Okay, so as a little note: I am still around, and I am still working on the final Piano Man Chapter.
    But, that brings me to an interesting point, that being; I'm not entirely sure I'll keep writing for FIMFiction once it's over. I'm not saying I won't, but it's a possibility.

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  • 576 weeks
    Hard at Work

    I know I've been very quiet update-wise as of late, so I feel it's best that I put up a quick blog post.

    As per normal, Those Who Came Before is still on hiatus until I've put out these last two Piano Man chapters. I just felt I should reaffirm that. The first of the two-part epilogue for The Piano Man: Act II is close to completion too. I apologize for the long wait.

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  • 583 weeks
    Google "The Piano Man"

    Every now and then, I Google my stories, just to see how far down the list they pop up. Obviously, The Piano Man has never been high on the search results unless you include 'FIMfiction' in the search bar.

    But...

    Seriously. What.
    WHAT.

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Oct
13th
2012

You Won't Believe This · 10:56am Oct 13th, 2012

Okay, you guys won't BELIEVE this, but amazingly - astoundingly, even - I've changed the status of 'Red Vs Blue: Epsilon in Equestria' to On-Hiatus.
Yeah, it's really something, isn't it?

*cough*

Anyway, my strange theatrics aside, I'd like to be serious for a moment. Firstly, Believe it or not, I don't think the story is worth cancelling. I actually plan to release another chapter or two some time in the future. Why? Because I love Red Vs Blue, that's why. I don't even know why you people bothered reading my half-assed trash-piece of a story anyway, to be honest. I mean really, have you actually looked at it? That story is what happens when you don't put effort into your writing.

Obviously, it goes without saying that the main reason EiE has slipped into its coma is because of The Piano Man. close to three times as many likes on Act II than on EiE, (I think) so there's some food for thought.
Long story short: I'm enjoying writing The Piano Man, it's better written than EiE, (The later parts, anyway) and people like it a lot more. That's why things have happened the way they have. It doesn't really matter anyway. I doubt there'll be many tears shed over this old husk, and I doubt many readers will even come back once the new chapter is finally released.

But hey, I think that's enough of me complaining about how bad the story is. Enjoy the rest of your day, all.

- The Sentient Cloud.

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Comments ( 8 )

You got to share you got to care

Good luck then.:pinkiesmile:

well, your story IS good. if theres something you don't like about it as a whole might i suggest a rewrite with a different plot? just a suggestion becuse my editor did the same and now he has a stronger plot and the story is better overall. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Twilight_Sparkle.png meh. just gonna go back to doing whatever it was i was going to do now.

keep it real sentient cloud //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Spitfire_lazy.png //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Rainbow_dealwithit.png

I tell you what man, RVB has come a long way. I first started watching when I was about seven, and I fell in love. After season 5, I though that was the end. About two years ago, I decided to go back and watch it again, and foun there were three more seasons! And they're all fucking depressing.:fluttercry: I still love RVB, and I think it's better than it used to be but... Goddamn York and Carolina are the saddest ship in anything ever.

Would you guess I still check that story every single day? I really do like it regardless of what you think of it. Whatever, I suppose I'll wait for the blue moon that will mark an update.

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