I've got a plan this time · 8:20pm Aug 28th, 2017
Joker here. Whilst browsing though the latest comments on my last post, I couldn't help but notice one smartass being doubtful of me making it past three chapters. Understandable, given my track record, but I've got a plan for the next three chapters, and a series of goals to shoot for this time.
Or is that for my other project? What's my other project? Well, you see...
Actually, I'm pretty sure it's for Rainbow Factory. Here's the synopsis and titles for the next three chapters:
Homecoming: Rainbow learns of the breakout at the Rainbow Factory, but due to the lack of security because, doesn't find out Scoots has been revived. Scootaloo, meanwhile, learns how Black Lanterns normally work and both she and her power ring theorize how she died has something to do with why she's not like the rest. Upon returning to Ponyville, she reunites with Apple Bloom, Sweetie Belle, their boyfriends Featherweight and Button Mash, and Rumble. She also learns that Rainbow Dash had put the story of her death out as an accident, and had moved to Manehattan as a result of her death, while Scootaloo claims that she was merely comatose and didn't actually remember what happened.
One Down, Several To Go: Black Lantern hunts down her first target in her one-mare quest for vengeance. As a result, Rainbow begins to suspect that the escapee from the Factory may in fact be Scootaloo.
Ghosts of Our Failures: Rainbow Dash gets her ass kicked by a hallucination of a mangled Scootaloo, who accuses her of lying to her about being her sister, claiming that she isn't a hero, a friend, or a sister, and that she was nothing more than a murderer. A flashback afterwards reveals that when she was given the title of CEO of the Rainbow Factory, she has been tormented and haunted by nearly every death caused by the Pegasus Device, and that both the sinister and evil side she displays at the Rainbow Factory, and her cocky, awesome, 20% Cooler side that we both know and love from the show, are merely masks for a tortured and broken soul.
If you have suggestions for future chapters, or name ideas for Scootaloo's seven targets (not counting Rainbow Dash, of course) feel free to share them!
Best of luck making it past three chapters, friendo.
Seriously, though, I understand your difficulties. New ideas are always way easier to write than longer ideas.
Good luck dude and don't forget don't feed the trolls do not get angry at the troll it only makes them stronger ignore the troll and show how insignificant they truely are
Good luck. And are you planning on updating your other black lantern story?