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FoxMcCloud7921


Not much to say except that I love video games, my favorite series being Star Fox and Mass Effect; reading, sports, etc. I have a separate FanFiction account where more of my stories can be found.

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  • 195 weeks
    Guess what? I’m not dead!

    ...Though I can probably say my ambition to write kind of died. Until now! Like right now. So there’s one particular story I started awhile back and kind of left to collect dust, that being the Canterlot Files. Well, I’ve decided I’m going to start over on that, but before that I wanted to make a story that takes place before even The Crystal Prep Files. Like way back. So if you see Canterlot

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    3 comments · 370 views
  • 220 weeks
    TMW...

    You find a story that has the same picture and a similar title.
    https://www.fimfiction.net/story/401522/you-wont-remember-me

    :facehoof:

    2 comments · 293 views
  • 223 weeks
    Some Major Changes and a Very Late Update

    So it's been like...at least three or so months since I last did one of these? I can't really come up with a worthy excuse this time. But what I will say is that no I'm not dead...so there's that. You may have noticed I did some major editing on my Persona story...I realize there's no way I can keep to a day by day structure for each chapter cause otherwise this will have like 300+ chapters and I

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    1 comments · 315 views
  • 232 weeks
    :D

    When you realize you have new fanfic material.


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  • 233 weeks
    Mistakes were made...

    So I made a big mistake. In TAY, write out the locations of three artifacts and in the follow up chapter I for some reason switched two of them around. The good news is now I fixed it so apologies for the confusion. Mira of the story: don’t interrupt the chapter you’re working on by doing another story. :ajsleepy:

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May
29th
2017

About HFTOS.... · 6:37pm May 29th, 2017

I have to be honest, I've been looking back at some of the critique I've been getting and been wondering maybe I'm just pushing stuff out for your guys' sake. (I'm not saying that's a bad thing...)
I tend to write shorter chapters compared to other authors, this is no secret since I kind of feel like if I go on too much, (unless it's like an important scene) then people might get bored I guess?

Anyway, if it's not a concern to you people just ignore my babbling. Obviously if this story has as many likes as it does then I must be doing something right. But as always, I welcome constructive criticism!

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Comments ( 5 )

I really am enjoying the story, personally.

As Chrome said, I'm honestly loving the story.^_^

Nope, not bored at all. Everything you write feels relevant and it always adds up fairly well.

Trust me, I've been here a while; 2K word chapters aren't even close to the longest I've read in a single sitting. I feel confident in saying the same for the rest of your readers; we're probably hoping for longer chapters to be honest (I know I am).

You're doing really well right now. Just write whatever feels right for the chapter, and you'll definitely be fine.

As a writer I advocate for following these directives:
Write to make yourself happy.
Keep writing even when it's a bit dull, but play with it. Have fun. If you're bored with the status quo, go wild.
Listen to your heart, but take in advice and input as a way to improve.

Of course, I don't always follow them, lol. But I hope they help.

What Hope said. This is the first story of yours I've read and I'm enjoying it. Keep doing what you're doing.

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