The Race has been edited!

Remember this story?

Well, at long last it's been made a little bit better thanks Trildar who went through and prodded me until [almost] all of the mistakes were ironed out. This has actually been on my to-do list for a some time now, but I've been too lazy to actually update the live copy.

So yeah, if you've read it before, it's probably about the same. Nothing's really been changed in the story, just some stylistic differences.