Planning Stage · 4:37am May 13th, 2017
Of course, I already have planned out the main plot points for the entire series (which will be given a name soon, I still have to think about it), but there is still much to plan for this next entry in the series.
What I need from you is feedback on Guiding Light. What did you like about it? What didn't you like? What felt "right?" What felt "off?"
You can be as general or specific as you want, but I do at least want some specific scenes.
Seriously, any feedback will really help me improve my writing style, as well as help me know what you, the readers, want. Don't worry - I am not one to take offense to criticism. Be blunt. Be honest. And if you remember specific moments you liked, please point them out as well, as I can try to emulate what I did in those scenes in order to improve everything overall.
Overall im enjoying it no real complaints so far just glad someone is doing an earth pony mage character story.