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Dream Seeker


Well, I just figured out how to do a short bio! So, yeah.

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  • 99 weeks
    Current Status

    Well, I've been more or less missing for the past around 4 years, haven't I? In that time, so much has happened, and so much has changed. I have a BS in Computer Science, I have a job as a Software Engineer, I've made friends, I've lost friends. Life has been... busy, and I haven't really done much writing in a long time. However, I do still enjoy MLP, and I'd like to start writing again as I

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  • 320 weeks
    Stephen Hawking

    Today, I stand here mourning the loss of Stephen Hawking, one of the greatest scientific minds of all time, and one of my personal idols. He was not only absolutely brilliant, but also loved humor, wrote children’s novels, and was generally a wonderful human being. When he was only a few years older than I am, he was diagnosed with the condition that would later reduce his movement until he

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  • 352 weeks
    Art Friend Looking for Commissions!

    Hello everybody! I've got a friend, Wolfs42, who is a budding young artist in need of your support through views and attention and commissions! They draw both SFW and NSFW art.

    Here is their tumblr: http://wolfs424.tumblr.com
    Here is their deviantart: http://wolfs42.deviantart.com

    Thank you!

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  • 355 weeks
    Trotcon!

    After plenty of stress, struggle, tears, and pain, I've finally managed to secure my tickets for Ohio tomorrow. Trotcon, here I come! Anybody else coming?

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  • 361 weeks
    Moving for Summer Internship

    Hello everybody, today I have an announcement to make! I've got an internship this summer, but it's out of state. In fact, it's all the way in Georgia, which is a far cry from California, where I usually live. So, this summer, I'll be staying in Georgia!

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May
6th
2017

Entropy: Cancel, Remove, or Finish? · 10:22pm May 6th, 2017

So, I've finally realized what's been really bothering me so much about Entropy:

This is not a reformation story. It's about taking Discord's character and crushing it to broken pieces and dust, leaving behind something shockingly dull and mindless behind. This is not Balance, or Harmony, except in the barest sense. I'm destroying his character on a fundamental level and leaving nothing but Order behind.

As I've realized this, I'm now left with several options.

1.) Delete this story for its poor moral.
2.) Leave it cancelled but unfinished.
3.) Finish the thing the way it is, poor moral and all.
4.) Rewrite it a third time, without destroying Discord's personality, but changing a good portion of the plot to allow him to maintain some chaos and magic.
5.) Keep writing it, but find a way to 'twist' the ending as is to something more meaningful and real, that fixes what would have been a horrible moral into something better.

What do you guys think I should do here? And what do you think about the story as a whole and/or Discord's characterization in it?

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