Revision of the first chapter of "The Strange Case of Dinky Hooves' Cutie Mark Curiosity"

Here is a little heads-up about something I'm doing right now. I am currently revising the first chapter of "The Strange Case of Dinky Hooves' Cutie Mark Curiosity" because I will continue it soon.
I'm not talking about the release schedule yet, as I said here, this blog entry still has to come, but I wanted to let you know that the first chapter will be rewritten.
There won't be major changes about the plot, but I am going through it slowly and fix sentences and grammar to bring the chapter up to my current level. A few sentences or descriptions might get axed if I realize they don't fit. And I want to try doing something about the long construction part to make it less dragging, while still keeping focus on it.
So, if you value anything about the way the chapter is written currently, this is now your chance to download it before it will be replaced with a new version, which will happen over the course of the next few days or maybe tomorrow at the earliest.
Get it while you can!