Major Changes to Ghost Rider... kinda? · 2:31pm Mar 30th, 2017
Where the idea even came from
Almost done with the newest chapter of Rider! I hope to finish it soon, and to have it uploaded as soon as possible. In the meantime, I am also going back and editing all of Ghost Rider... God have mercy on me... I have already edited chapter one, check it out here. to see if you like the new changes. I am trying to update it for my writing style, and filling in plot holes that I had created when the story was going in a different direction. I still have the original chapter, but I want you all to tell me if you like the new one.
Hope you all do enjoy!
Capt. U
Who is that guy? I've been trying to find his videos!
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Nostalgia Critic
4477219 Thank you soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much!!
How much plot holes does it have?
I believe the only two I saw was how did Granpa Apple get a Harvey and why Equestria ain't more advanced?
4477274 Stuff I mostly notice. As fir motorcycles in Equestria... they do have those and arcade games, peddle power helicopters, and like
Hell they have a dam! Those are super advanced! So... magic?
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Wait, a paddle powered helicopter but a complete Harvey, what, Pegasi don't like competition?
4477585 No clue