Mar
24th
2017
Bad news. And I need an editor! · 8:50pm Mar 24th, 2017
So my cousin, he ODed on a drug because he's suicidal. He was dead for 15 minutes, but the paramedics managed to save him with the shock things. I haven't had the will to do anything for the past week. I haven't even worked on the next chapter, because I was studying for 5 tests and worrying about him. I also need an editor to help me. If anybody here has editing skills that are decent I would greatly appreciate a PM.
Dont worry about writing family comes first.
That's awful. Best wishes.
What do you need from an editor? Correct your spelling mistakes? Rephrase bad sentences? Tell you "This part sucks, rewrite it," when necessary? I can't do the latter, but otherwise could give a try.
Why are you even worrying about writing?
You should be worrying about your family not our entertainment.
I think what you're thinking of as the shock thingy is actually a defibrillator.
I could edit, if need be, but my visits to the site are a bit sporadic.
4473479 I wasn't thinking at the time so I said shock thingy.