I am giving up on this story. I have already contacted 2 moderators about sending it back but they wont respond to me; I told Yoni and he said he wants it back so I guess I have to wait on a mod?

So https://www.fimfiction.net/user/ScootalooFTW is now my Co Writer. He is fantastic. He edited the last chapter for me. I think it would be good if you went back and read it over again.

My cousin is okay now, they allowed him to go home. He doesn't have any brain damage. But he is under watch just in case he attempt to kill himself. His mother has to be with him at all times. I'm going to see him today.

So my cousin, he ODed on a drug because he's suicidal. He was dead for 15 minutes, but the paramedics managed to save him with the shock things. I haven't had the will to do anything for the past week. I haven't even worked on the next chapter, because I was studying for 5 tests and worrying about him. I also need an editor to help me. If anybody here has editing skills that are decent I would greatly appreciate a PM.

Just checked the front page and le story is at number 7. Thanks guys ;D

So I got absolutely no response from my "Editors" so I'm going to just post the chapter without editing. I made you guys wait long enough. Any good editors out there, please pm me :D

So I took down the chapter Ponyville because Yoni said something about you guys not liking the fact Adam going to Ponyville. So now I am continuing with what Yoni left me, a unfinished chapter. I am not going to put a date when I will be finished because I know my lazy ass wont get it done in time. Wont be long.

Alright so I'm going to game for a couple of hours then I will continue working on a new chapter. I haven't been able to do anything for the past 6-7 days, it's my break to which sucks because half of it was without internet.

I'm sorry for not getting to this sooner but thank you all of you for following me even though I haven't gotten to this sooner and you haven't seen anything yet because I've been busy with life and our internet got cut out 4 days ago. We should have them come in tomorrow to hook it back out. I just gotta say something I need advice on something, I took a shower and when I was getting changed my curtain fell down and when I looked up I saw a dude looking in. I don't know if it was my imagination

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So I read the story again, and now I finally think I almost know where to go with it ;D I need an editor though. (Badly)