I am giving up on this story. I have already contacted 2 moderators about sending it back but they wont respond to me; I told Yoni and he said he wants it back so I guess I have to wait on a mod?
So https://www.fimfiction.net/user/ScootalooFTW is now my Co Writer. He is fantastic. He edited the last chapter for me. I think it would be good if you went back and read it over again.
My cousin is okay now, they allowed him to go home. He doesn't have any brain damage. But he is under watch just in case he attempt to kill himself. His mother has to be with him at all times. I'm going to see him today.
So my cousin, he ODed on a drug because he's suicidal. He was dead for 15 minutes, but the paramedics managed to save him with the shock things. I haven't had the will to do anything for the past week. I haven't even worked on the next chapter, because I was studying for 5 tests and worrying about him. I also need an editor to help me. If anybody here has editing skills that are decent I would
My cousin is okay now, they allowed him to go home. He doesn't have any brain damage. But he is under watch just in case he attempt to kill himself. His mother has to be with him at all times. I'm going to see him today.
Who?