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Robo Bro


A Canadian brony who enjoys writing stories. On rare occasions I even post those stories here.

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Feb
17th
2017

Chrysalis: Saviour of Time Description Change · 6:13am Feb 17th, 2017

I noticed a person or two mentioning in the comments that they had been hesitant to read the story because they didn't really want to follow the OC of Time Keeper (and that they were pleased to find that Chrysalis was the main focus). While I did kinda like the description I had given it, I can easily see the issue. It focuses too much on Time Keeper and not on Chrysalis, giving that false impression that people have mentioned having. I've gone and rewritten the entire description to move the focus to where it should be: on Chrysalis with Time Keeper as a secondary character who acts more as the inciting incident than a protagonist. I've also removed the dark tag because I realize that while the base premise of Twilight being crushed to death is a little on the dark side, the overall story doesn't seem to have that much in the way of dark themes. Pessimistic and angry with Chrysalis perhaps, but not too dark. If you want to, let me know what you think about the changes.

In other news, I've been writing a bit more this last week or so than I had for the past few months prior. If all goes well, I'll have the next chapter fully written (though not typed up, proof-read, self-edited, etc) within a few more days. With luck, I may have the next chapter up in a week or so.

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