Previews Of Past, Present, Or Damnation · 11:26am Dec 23rd, 2016
Sorry I didn't get this out sooner. I have had a bad week. I will still be getting offline today, but I will stay online until 5:00 pm central. Anyway, here is the preview of the sequel to Endless Time, Or Forever End. Here is the preview of Past, Present, Or Damnation.
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(Now try to keep in mind that my Proofreader hasn't gotten to this part in fixing yet. I had to use this scene, because this was the only scene that didn't spoil too much)
(Note, the characters in this preview are Anthro)
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Starlight continued to rest on a cushion she had found in the spot she was hiding in. She had not figured out what to do next. Her plan was originally to go back and stop the rainboom. In doing so, it would ensure that Twilight and her friends would never be a problem.
Being stuck in this timeline was hindering her plans. What was she going to do now? She kept trying to think of something to do, when suddenly everything told her to move. NOW. She jumped out the way as a bone knife stabbed into the cushion.
“Damn, I missed,”
Starlight span around at that voice, trying to find where it came from. “Who are you? Where are you?” she question.
“Who am I does not matter. What does matter is why I’m here. And I’m here to kill you.” Without warning he dropped down, slicing at her back with another bone knife as he landed on the cushion. She quickly turned around and jumped back away from him as he picked up his other bone knife.
It was too dark to see what he looked like, so she ran for it. Ignoring the cut on her back, she made her way down the alley until she reached an opening. Up ahead she saw a crowd of ponies. She didn’t know where the enemy was, so she jumped into the crowd, hoping he would lose sight of her.
However this was not going to stop him. He charged, knives forward into the crowd, taking down a few ponies along the way. The crowd screamed as the bodies fell. Starlight quickly saw her cover was running out. Looking for something to fight with, she used her magic to pull over a metal pole.
“Oh want to play hardball.” He held his arm out and grabbed one of the bystanders as they ran. He knocked the pony down and proceeded to pulled at the pony’s arm. “Sorry, I need to borrow this.” Starlight looked in horror as the assassin ripped off the pony’s arm like it was nothing. “Thank you,” he said with no emotions.
Starlight quickly realized that this assassin was going to fight with a severed arm. “Well shit, you’re just all kinds of crazy.”
“You know my ex-marefriend tells me that every time we break up.”
Starlight charged at him, swinging with the metal pole. He used the severed arm like a nunchuk, as he wrapped it around the pole and twisted it out of her hand. Afterword he spun the pole around his body and then punched it into her face. This knocked her to the ground, hard.
“You know little mare, I was not suppose to be spotted,” he walked over. “The plan was to kill you or bring you to my master.” He got to her as she was getting up, kicking her hard in the gut. He grabbed her by the throat and lifting her into the air. At this range she was able to get a look at him.
His coat was like a rotting white, and his mane was dark green. He wore a bright neon yellow-sleeved cape and hood and a pair black pants. His chest was bare of everything but two straps over his well-sculpted chest. He seemed to have several bone knives lining the inside of his sleeved cape. The strangest choices of his clothing were the white handkerchief over his mouth and his gloves - the left one was red and the right one was blue.
Interesting. Intriguing. Possibly worthy of my reading. Excellent.
Good preview! It does raise several, good questions that I expect will be answered in the story. The preview was simple, yet descriptive, so it was easy to read. The fight scene was short, yet a little nerve wracking, thus well written. Good job!
4352271 Oh thank you.
4352130 Possible is a good for me. The story itself is set to come out in March.
4352404 Excellent.
4353262 Cool. The story is set to come out in March.
I just got to reading this, it looks like it will be good.
Glen Gorewood
4379579 Yeah I can't wait to show off the story to you all. The first chapters are set to come out in March. Though unlike the previous story Endless Time, the story's chapters will be released in two-week intervals to give me better time to work with.