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I write stories because I enjoy them. I want to do better and am willing to take any advice to improve.


Bab Seed goes on an adventure of a lifetime, or at least that what she was expecting until she was saddled with delivering cat food to Granny Golden Delicious's house. Things couldn't get any more boring... until she finds a poorly disguised King Sombra attempting to steal her basket with a motor-mouthing Cozy Glow beside him. Before she can process any of this, Derpy crashes through the window with a dead body in her hooves and the police show up to arrest all of them. There is going to be a lot of explaining to be done and mysteries to unravel and it's up to detective BlueBlood to end the case.


Yes, this is based off the seriously underrated movie, Hoodwink, and involves a multiple POV retelling of events with overlapping ties and a really good though cliche twist, really the movie managed to pull such a twist off. Each chapter will have an Interlude Chapter posted before it introducing the character to be speaking their POV in the corresponding chapter.

To make things more challenging on me I used a random assortment of characters as replacement like;

Bab Seed as Red
King Sombra as Wolf
Golden Delicious as Granny
Derpy as the Lumberjack
Cozy Glow as Twitchy
Blueblood as Flippers

And many more to be revealed like;

Lil Cheese
Pinkie Pie
Birch Bucket
Parcel Post
Lightning Dust

A small cameo from Arubus, the G1 villain
Grogar(the real one, Yes, I'm using him to replace that character)


Also, I will be following the canon as closely as possible, by that as close to the show's canon so expect some rather fun and odd reasons why certain characters are doing certain things. I'm saying this is me treating them as OOC, but rather using the story to build up as to why these characters are here. The biggest point of the movie was to find out why these characters were gathered together like this and I plan to explore the same idea, just with a less flexible cast to really push my limits in storytelling.

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"The world of Equestria was once filled with peace and friendship as far as the eye could see, but ever since the destruction of Canterlot, this once great country has fallen into anarchy and despair. The princesses are gone, the six are gone, everypony is gone. The only hope lies in a dangerous mission of horrible proportions...

... At least that how I've described the terrible mission, I am Comet Tail, a retired bodyguard forced back into service... Against my will by my ex. He can really be a problem sometimes."


Heavily inspired by the movie's Hitman's Bodyguard. Only I've tossed in a few more characters and change few relationships. These include a homosexual Comet Tail and the first appearance of the OC Stone which belongs to my friend, Rubyfire377. He wanted to get into some of my stories and I thought why not throw him into this, with his permission of course.

Also, how does Comet Tail not have a tag yet? This character has been part of the fandom since season one.

Note this does take in my universe but explores a part of my universe I have been ignoring for so long. So don't worry about reading the other stuff, at least I give some hints the other stories, they aren't required reads.

The cover will be coming soon.

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A gathering of letters and notes by Dr. Pr. Halo, a stallion supposedly chose by the alicorns to explore a world that has never seen the friendship and goodness. Look into the land as it was before Equestria was founded.

This is a side story to Journey To Hearth's Warming. It is not required to enjoy the original story nor is it needed to read the original story to enjoy this. They simply add fluff to each other. This is a simple a side story that will get new parts periodically.

Might jump to Teen rating later, I'm not completely sure yet.

Chapters (14)

An ancient spell is activated, sending them into the distant past. Now, with no way home they are forced to live through events they were never meant to be apart two ponies try their best to stay out of history's way for more than two years. However, things don't go as planned when they get pulled right into the middle of a war between the immortal alicorns and mortal ponies. All while a mysterious wendigo claiming to be a king makes a bid for power that might change all of history.


Please note that the rating may rise up to M if and when it's needed. Though I will try my best to keep at a T rating for as long as possible. Also, the romance tag has nothing to do with Twilight and Starlight being shipped with each other. Sorry, but I have other ships planned. If you have been following since I started working on the previews of this you know what I'm talking about.

Cover Artist: Sakura

Chapters (28)

This story is a sequel to Twilily Saga: Endless Time, Or Forever End.

Going back in time to fix the future, Twilight must work with an immortal creature called 'F' to save Starlight during the time of Nightmare Moon's rise. Look into the world that was hidden from Twilight, where she not only encounters ancient evils but must stop the "Greatest Evil" from claiming the power of God. Here lies the ancient past, the unseen present, and the damned future.

Note: The prequel is not required to read this. Because I fill any gaps as we go.

Proofreaders: Hail King Sombra, mikemeiers

Cover Artist: Sakura

Part of the Twilily Saga and a part of my Darklightverse.

Extra Tags: Grogar, Zeb. Selena Moondie, Cult Race, and many more.

Chapters (21)

The cutest couple in all Ponyville have their first fight. Will it end their relationship? Will it make their relationship better? And will anypony get some sleep this morning? Wait...... what?

Proofread by Hail King Sombra

Art by h0mi3

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"I am the master of twist. I am the master of Cliffhanger. I am the master of 'Out of nowhere Ideas that don't make sense but do make sense in the end anyway'. I AM THE MASTER.............. Wait what am I the master of again."

The guy next to him said "when crazy shit happens,"



If you take this story too seriously then you not getting the idea of what day this one came out.

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Rarity receive an unknown gift, for Heartwarming Eve, only problem, she has no idea who it is from. It being so beautiful wrapped, she has too assume it is from one of her friends or maybe an ex. She dare not open till she find out who sent it.

Take place a few years after the show. This is completely separate from the rest of my stories.

Inspired by this Blog, by the Idea it brought up. Not it's reasons.

Chapters (7)
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