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Hey everyone, Brony117 here! I've noticed I haven't received any more reviews on my recently Assassin's Creed chapter fanfic. Any ideas why? I could use the help so I can see this story become even more popular, as well as my returning megaman fanfic here on fimfiction. I would really appreciate that. Thanks!

Comments

[SageBrony07]

I'm not sure what you could have done to improve. To make your story more popular (in my opinion). You need to use details, a good plot, and regular updates. On my fanfic account if you add a chapter every week to two weeks you get a decent crowd following your story.

[Brony117]

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Yeah true, but you know how real life is. But still thanks for the tip. As for updating, I try not to rush unlike most fanfics that dont put hard work and dedication to the plot and details. So it takes me a while to at least try make my story readable and when I have the time to work on it.

[Spettro138]

Hey there! I'm really liking your Assassin's Creed 3 fic. It has a lot of great potential. Just gonna give some constructive criticism and a quick review though. Make sure you take some time to go back through all of your past chapters and do a little bit of grammatical proofreading. Also, make sure you remember to use Connor's passive-aggressive socially awkward quirks to their fullest. Connor is a fish out of water here in a world very different from his own, so some modern day things in a semi-renaissance world should confuse him. Also if he still has Captain Kidd's Shard of Eden that you can find in the game you could use that in a scenario if a unicorn tries to use magic on him. You may want to eventually include Connor remembering things he was taught like math, science, english, history, manners, table etiquette, and more "proper" things that would befit a man of decency and high society. I'm sure Achillies taught him that much. Oh, and also remember to try to include his natural tracking skills when you can that you can use in the game. All in all, if you want surefire inspiration, give Assassin's Creed 3 and its DLCS another few playthroughs.

Oh yeah! I almost forgot. Try to include his alternate memories and animal spirit powers from the Tyranny of King Washington timeline DLC.

I'll be sure to give you more suggestions as I go through each chapter.