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Brony117


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  • 152 weeks
    Update on what's up

    He guys! It's been...years. Years since I've been here and updated my most famous, if it still is, fanfic in this site. So I've been struggling with life like anyone else, you know the kind: work, family stuff, life and questioning what then heck am I even going do with my life. It's a struggle we have to deal with. For me, it's work. Pay bills, save money and other things. It's what made me

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  • 234 weeks
    Are we winning or losing?!

    Hey guys, here with an update that affects this fanfic, and the entire internet. The FCC are planning to ruin the internet. In other words, ruin our freedom of writing fanfics! I just found out about this ealier this week. So I can't focus on continuing my stories if the FCC are creating a mess at this time. So I searched to see if we are winning this battle. By the looks of it, it does not. So I

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  • 255 weeks
    Struggling

    Hey guys what's up? Im kinda in a struggle here. I've been writing non-mlp fanfics and I have been enjoying it so far, but I'm taking a break and I want to work on mlp fanfics again, but I'm in the decision on working on on I not. Have you guys ever had that feeling before? I want to get back to mlp, but I don't know if I want to. And it's kinda tearing me apart. I don't want to leave you guys.

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  • 262 weeks
    hello?

    Hello? Anybody still there? I just want to know if you guys still support me and still want me work on my fanfics? Can I get some replies so that I know I can still work on it. Thanks.

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  • 263 weeks
    Sorry!

    Hey everyone sorry for the hold up. I've been very busy lately as I couldn't have the time to work my stories. I hope you guys understand as I'm sure you are busy too. Yeah it's been crazy busy with my life as I rarely have to time to write. Also, this is to show you that I'm not dead or anything, just occupied. Lastly, thanks for your support and I hope I can get back to writing. Thank you.

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Dec
14th
2016

not enough reviews... · 4:26pm Dec 14th, 2016

Hey everyone, Brony117 here! I've noticed I haven't received any more reviews on my recently Assassin's Creed chapter fanfic. Any ideas why? I could use the help so I can see this story become even more popular, as well as my returning megaman fanfic here on fimfiction. I would really appreciate that. Thanks!

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I'm not sure what you could have done to improve. To make your story more popular (in my opinion). You need to use details, a good plot, and regular updates. On my fanfic account if you add a chapter every week to two weeks you get a decent crowd following your story.

Comment posted by Brony117 deleted Dec 14th, 2016

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Yeah true, but you know how real life is. But still thanks for the tip. As for updating, I try not to rush unlike most fanfics that dont put hard work and dedication to the plot and details. So it takes me a while to at least try make my story readable and when I have the time to work on it.

Hey there! I'm really liking your Assassin's Creed 3 fic. It has a lot of great potential. Just gonna give some constructive criticism and a quick review though. :twilightblush: Make sure you take some time to go back through all of your past chapters and do a little bit of grammatical proofreading. Also, make sure you remember to use Connor's passive-aggressive socially awkward quirks to their fullest. Connor is a fish out of water here in a world very different from his own, so some modern day things in a semi-renaissance world should confuse him. Also if he still has Captain Kidd's Shard of Eden that you can find in the game you could use that in a scenario if a unicorn tries to use magic on him. You may want to eventually include Connor remembering things he was taught like math, science, english, history, manners, table etiquette, and more "proper" things that would befit a man of decency and high society. I'm sure Achillies taught him that much. Oh, and also remember to try to include his natural tracking skills when you can that you can use in the game. All in all, if you want surefire inspiration, give Assassin's Creed 3 and its DLCS another few playthroughs.

Oh yeah! I almost forgot. Try to include his alternate memories and animal spirit powers from the Tyranny of King Washington timeline DLC.

I'll be sure to give you more suggestions as I go through each chapter.

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