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Mocha Star


I'm here to write my way into your hearts and infect your minds.

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  • 72 weeks
    I made a oops

    I was talking about Dark Souls and couldn't figure out why my friend started laughing.

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  • 79 weeks
    New story reading

    A new reading and it's very good.

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  • 79 weeks
    Feeling accomplished

    I am helping a friend thru hard times.

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  • 155 weeks
    Going to the local pd

    Going to the local pd to be probably charged with some Bullshit. Hope not be to. If you don't hear from me for a couple months, you'll know why.

    The ex made her summer charges about me abusing my kids already.

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  • 156 weeks
    Past two weeks

    They've been great, but I've been so bleh.
    Like, depressed and overworked.
    I'm slowly writing the next chapters, for those that are waiting between my stories, so don't fret about that.

    That's all!
    Oh yeah, I got a new SUV and it's great. My credit is going up and I may use my VA benefits to buy a house!

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Sep
9th
2016

Dumb EQD submissions rant/vent · 2:18pm Sep 9th, 2016

My stories are good, good enough to be posted on their dumb site, but they keep finding a comma out of place or the word count too low. WTF, it's supposed to be a site where the hopeful can fulfill their dreams of having a story posted.

Instead, I submit a story (Goodnight Moon) that is too short and 'couldn't possibly immerse a reader in such a short time.'

Did they even read it?! It's a total tear jerker and great enough to make anyone pout thinking about it. 20/3 is a great ratio for a story, BTW.
The last paragraph should have its own fandom!
...

Okay, rant over.

I know I'm not exactly right but sheesh, cut me some slack, EQD, I'm doing all I can and it's never enough, it seems.

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Comments ( 1 )

Don't forget there lots of other writers out there too..... and that's kind of a sadder darker story....

Not really what there looking for.

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