A Wonderbolts show takes a turn for the worse and a filly gets hurt.
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AHH FOR! F****S SAKE!
WWWWWWHHHHHHHHHHHHYYYYYYYYYYYY
GOD ITs SO AHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHA
It's just like lonely princess but worse
I do good at sad?
Oh god that was good. Was that song really necessary? Y'know what, it totally was, that ruined me. Christ.
Whelp, finally actually read it.
Stop you're making me cry!
I'm so sad to see Moon Watcher die. Hurts it so much...
*can't grab a tissue...
Anyway great story how you turned Rainbow Dash became a criminal for killing Moon Watcher. Like the 1st person POV.
The phone starts ringing. She walks over to it and picks it up.
"Hello?"
"You ordered a million boxes of Feelios, right?"
"What? No I didn't!"
"Great! We'll be over there in a jiffy!"
"But I didn't-" The man at teh other end of the line hangs up. She curses under her breath.
"More Feelios for breakfast, again..."
That ending was so cheesy and horribly sad at the same time.
My friend Cody and I are going to read this together over skype tonight... I expect a good time. Awesome story, man. I gotta keep reading more of your work.
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Hey, it's sad to me!
Very good sad story, though the song at the end was a little annoying...
Also, this story did not bring tears to my eyes, and I am not sure what is wrong with me; I have only ever had tears for one story, THIS ONE (The chapter labeled chapter 4).
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Ya know, when I wrote this it was a tear jerker, but as time went on I guess I've grown out of that idea/thought that any song can be made sad.
Thanks for reading and comment as you go if you choose to.
If you need an idea for a sad story I can suggest a couple that'll really get ya going, and no they aren't mine.
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I'm not really one for writing stories, I mostly review them... thank you for the offer, though.
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Wow, really? No one has commented in the last 9 weeks? Well then. Anyway, I have reviewed this HERE.
oh my gosh! that was so sad!
it was really good though
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Thank you SO much. I appreciate the comment.
:)
AI Review: https://www.fimfiction.net/group/217075/ai-reviews/thread/520760/goodnight-moon