Machine And Might Update #3 · 10:32pm Sep 12th, 2012
This one contains possible spoilers, so read at your own risk.
Changelog:
-Changed the name of the chapter.
-Minor grammar corrections.
-Added a conversation between Luna and the red-eyed creature.
-Overall, the scene with Luna was the major addition. Expect heavier modifications in the future.
hmm, it's like you read through your own story, look for plot holes, fill them in... then add more to the story as a whole
i'm impressed
Fill the Plot Hole with Luna and expand on it! Excellent good sir!