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Loganberry


Hold your ground but do not be unkind. (Ponyphonic, "Shy Heart") He/him. Ponyfic Roundup reviews every Wednesday.

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    The never-ending stor(e)y

    For some reason this is one of the points readers of mine (including off-site ones) have mentioned several times, perhaps because it's one of those Transatlantic divides that isn't all that well known. So: when you're talking about the floors of a building:

    US English: one story, two stories. The same spelling and the same plural as for the other kind of story.

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    Fics I reviewed in April 2024 (and one from late March)

    By popular request¹ I'm bringing back this feature. My weekly Ponyfic Roundup reviews are, and will remain, on my off-site blog. It just suits me to do it that way, even if I'd probably have got significantly more of a readership had I written the blogs on Fimfiction as most (all?) other current reviewers do. However, a

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    State of the Unicorn: Poor

    That's poor in both senses, I'm afraid! Though before I say any more, I need to stress that I have a warm, safe home, enough to eat, internet access... the essentials, really. I am not in danger of losing those. However, I won't be doing much beyond those essentials for a while. Without going into boring details, I will very shortly be going in for dental work to be done. Which, as

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    Happy Hearth's Warming Eve!

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  • 25 weeks
    So then, Doctor Who

    Loved it! A few little quibbles, not all the acting from the newcomers was stellar and sadly parts of the gender-related stuff felt awkward and forced, eg "something a male-presenting Time Lord wouldn't understand", but I liked much more than I didn't. Plus one of my worries about the new Disney-cash-infused Who has been dispelled: this definitely did

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Aug
6th
2016

S6E14: "The Cart Before the Ponies" · 8:04pm Aug 6th, 2016

As a real-life racing fan, I was hoping to have a lot of fun with this episode. Sadly, I didn't. I didn't hate it, and there were some nice touches, but too many things rubbed me up the wrong way. It didn't really seem to end properly, either. I enjoyed Ed Valentine's own "Flight to the Finish" way more than this. ★★

A little more, with spoilers, past the break.

First up: Applejack, Rainbow Dash and Rarity were either incredibly dense or plain obnoxious towards their sisters for much of the episode. It felt at times as though their characters had barely progressed since Season One. And what's with AJ's obsession with being slow? She's going up against Rainbow Dash -- I don't remember her thinking like this in "Fall Weather Friends". Yes, I know they were going for different prizes, and I accept that AJ prioritises Apples over absolutely anything else on earth... but I reckon she'd still have been at least a little ticked that to win the trad prize, she'd have to accept letting her greatest rival cross the line first.

I wasn't at all keen on the carts themselves, in particular the complete lack of explanation regarding how they were powered. I'd have been on board with magic power (like Tank's copter) or pedals or some Heath Robinson contraption like the FlimFlamMobile. But this? It seemed like the thinking was:

"We should totally do an episode where the ponies race cars!"
"Um, but they don't have racing cars in Equestria."
"Oh yeah... hey, I know! We'll just call 'em 'carts' instead! It's the perfect plan!"

That track design was absurd, too. Yes, I get that it was a nod to arcade racing games, but there is no way that Cheerilee would okay something like that for her pupils to race on. It didn't help that Dash was apparently fine with barging other cars off the track at speed -- again, putting foals at risk.

Now, good things. Unlike some people, I rather liked the song -- it's no classic and maybe a little forgettable, but it seemed to fit. The Scootachicken joke was actually amusing for once. Derpy was predictably great, especially in the Rarity flashback scene. And I think I even saw a pony with Firefly's colouration near the end -- I could entirely believe her as a racing fan.

But on the whole, this was a bit of a let-down. Considering how much I like racing in real life, the fact that I'm not feeling much enthusiasm to watch this again says something.

Comments ( 3 )

Just had my first viewing.

Relating to spoilers:

I didn't notice the Scootachicken joke or Firefly, so I'll have to look out for those again on future viewings.

Thoughts on the episode; very mixed. Some good aspects, some terrible aspects.

4135585 I do wonder how much of my feelings of disappointment are because I loved last week's episode -- almost anything would have been a step down from that. I really do think the characterisation was flawed, though, and that's something that always bothers me in this show.

4135634 Last week was a tough act to follow, but even so; this wasn't great.

My full blog post's up now.

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