Chapter 12 Preview · 9:51pm Jul 15th, 2016
Now I know you all are waiting for the new chapter and yes, it is in the works. It will still be a while until it's finished, but here's a little teaser for you all to water your mouths on. Also Probably some of the most dramatic, emotional scenes I've ever written!
Enjoy!!!
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“I FOUND SOMEPONY!”
Rainbow Dash and Applejack both snapped their attention towards the voice, which came from a stallion digging near the back of the house where the structure remained mostly intact. The two ran over as fast as they could, with Applejack surprisingly running faster than her friend. However, before either of them could make eye contact with the pony under the rubble, they were pushed aside as Doctor Stable and a few nurses came to see what they could do, keeping the two ponies away from knowing what had happened to their friend.
“Okay, what have we got?”
“The patient has lost a significant amount of blood, with wooden chip puncturing her abdomen. Patient also has third degree burn scar running down the back of her left ear to the joint connecting her wing to her shoulder bone. I don’t have a pulse.”
“Alright, get me the defibrillator, quick!”
“It’s not working!” one of the nurses screamed, words which pierced the ears of Rainbow and Applejack like a cold blade.
“No.” Dash whispered.
“Well, what did you expect? She’s probably been lying here for an hour!” a nurse with a brash attitude said, earning a glare from the doctor.
“Scalpel! Now is NOT the time! Her friends are here, for Celestia’s sake!” Doctor Stable eyed the two mares behind him, along with the other three who had shown up who were walking over to what was going on.
“I’m...I’m sorry. She’s too far gone.” he sighed, turning his head to the group as he step away from the lifeless form of Fluttershy.
Rarity stifled a cry as she put her hooves to her mouth, turning away into Spike’s comforting hold, while Pinkie Pie herself was silent, not yet able to process the death of her friend. And what was before them was not a pretty sight. Fluttershy laid motionless on the ground covered in dirt and ash, dirtying her coat with black and gray. A horrible looking burn scar ran down the back of her head, trailing down her left ear to the joint of her wing, black and deformed in some areas and red and blooded in others. And yet there was a calm on her face, a morbid peace despite the pain she must have gone through, the bruises and the long splinter of wood that punctured the right side of her abdomen, stained to its sharpened tip with her blood.
“No…no.” Rainbow mumbled in shock, falling down to her knees beside Fluttershy’s body.
“Rainbow, I’m sorry.” Applejack put her hoof on Rainbow’s shoulder, looking down on what was left of kindest mare she knew. Rainbow just continued to shake her head, resisting the truth of what she saw as she repeated the same word over and over to herself.
“Come on, there’s nothing we can do.” Applejack reached for Dash’s hoof, but was batted away as the cyan mare suddenly lunged at Fluttershy, grabbing hold of her body and shaking it violently.
“Fluttershy, god damn it!” she screamed, shaking the body back and forth in such a rage that if she had been alive she would have broken her neck.
“Rainbow?!” Applejack shouted, laying on the ground as she had falling backwards when Rainbow had bolted, staring at her in disbelief.
“Wake up, you BITCH! WAKE UP!” Rainbow screamed with an almost insane malice, tears beginning to swell in the corner of her eyes as she began to slap Fluttershy across the face. All in a vain attempt to get some response that would never come, striking again and again.
“Rainbow, stop it! That’s ENOUGH!” Applejack barked angrily, grabbing Rainbow around her stomach and holding her arms back, slowly dragging her back against her struggles.
“NO! NO!!! WAKE UP!!! WAKE UP! Wake up!” Rainbow cried, each time she spoke the words in her mouth becoming weaker until the only sound she made was her attempt to catch her breath as the tears and the pain took all her strength away.
“I know Dash, I know. Shush...”
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Don't forget to comment below to tell me what you think.
Fluttershy
4094193 Poor Rainbow, right?
4094248 yes
poor Rainbow and Fluttershy 
4094260 On a scale of one to ten, how good was Chapter 11?
4108664 well I'm kind of split on that with the part of Fluttershy dieing thing is one thing I don't her or any of the main 6 and there loved ones to die. but as a whole chapter and I put my feelings Fluttershy dieing aside I would say 10 it was well put to gather, and made me want to know what happens next right away. I love this story
4108684 This answer pleases me. I'm smiling like an idiot right now.
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4109046 Me.
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not to sound mean or anything but creepy
4109485 It was meant to be that why. It was for a reaction video I did a while back.
4109527 okay then
4109578 Yeah...