Pre-Readers Needed for Sanity Check · 5:49am Jul 2nd, 2016
So, I'm sure it probably comes as no surprise that I'm mostly into M/f or F/f BDSM. I plan to show a wide range, though, and I may need assistance on them. Coupled with that fact is that when my fibro gets bad, I can get... extravagant. Now, with Hunting Season on half-hiatus, I don't feel as concerned about this immediately, but it occurs to me that in given that, getting some opinions on whether or not I should release a certain side-story as is, with modifications, or trash and re-run.
Basically, back when I was getting started, I asked Megapone if I could use his fic Down For The Count as an inspiration/assumed background event of the world. Celly's height at 10'8" with size-thirty feet comes from there, as does what happens when you piss her off sufficiently and put yourself in her sights. Blueblood's life is little more than a sidestory, but he did give me room to pull in what I consider foreplay in fics-- femdom over a male. The femdom is then dommed more later in a very strange series of domination because I'm a kinky perv. The thing is, I'm not really used to writing where the male is the sub, so I'm a bit hazy on limits.
So at one point I wrote what I thought might happen if Blueblood didn't change his ways despite having his money cut off, and eventually got desperate enough to cut a deal with Celestia. Unfortunately, then as now, while writing it, I was in a bad fibro way and I'm concerned that the pain may have made me vicious. The sidestory, tentatively titled Victor's Spoils, Blueblood's Fate, is also on the old side and will need a lot of cleaning up to go public, but it's only referenced about six chapters out from where we are right now, and since I'm taking my time, I have time to go through and ask for interested pre-readers to tell me if I've gone a bit crazypants there, especially with the moral levels that-- despite hyper aggression and maretriarchal leanings-- I've tried to emphasize.
These are going to be a bit more specific than I'd usually include, just to make sure anyone who's interested goes in clear:
Kinks in the main part of the fic include: Dubiously ethical levels of consent, femdom/malesub, condescension, harsh orders, heavy humiliation, enforced semi-permanent chastity and surrender of sexual/marital rights to another's keeping, massive orgasm denial, closet/backrooms near-public BDSM session, medium to heavy physical domination and control, body modification by diet and tesosterone control, matronization, semi-infantilism, some tender but definite domination, fierce protectiveness of a naughty sub, ordered stripping, groin and ass regions shaved bald and cleaned, genital and testicle bondage and cleaning, including brief, magically enhanced sounding, magical filming of sex with the blunt purpose of showing it off to humiliate the sub by proxy, SPH by comparison (not actually small, even in world), forced admission of exhibitionism, gloved anal fingering/ prostate massage and masturbation, collection of sperm for unknown purposes of Celestia's
There's also an epilogue with Maledom/femsub, teasing, watching the magical equivalent of a homemade porno, closet sex again there's something wrong with me, pure physical domination, cumflation, stretching, really, my usual fare, honestly but I'm not as concerned there.
If you're interested in sanity checking me in exchange for a preview, please send me a PM.
Troublesome Beast "I need a pre-reader to pre-read a story with a complete encyclopedia list-long of kinks and fetishes"
Me "That's.... really tempting.... but I don't think I can help you, because I wouldn't get anything done while reading it.... including help you."
4062515 I guess at this point I don't really need in depth examination. Just a read through and a check to see if Twilight comes off as hot but moral, or goes too far over the line, if that makes sense?
4062578 Oh it makes sense. I was trying to be funny.