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Chapter Forty deleted and reposted. MAJOR change made. Please read. · 6:54pm Jun 6th, 2016
Why are you here? Please read the updated chapter forty, please. 
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Wow, how much hate did you receive to change the chapter? I know I've posted some... disliking comments to you, but jees.
I noticed that you decided to remove the herd idea. Guess it's the House of Parker fate all over again.
Don't worry, man. I don't have any problem with it either way it went.
If you have any doubts, you know you can talk to me if you want to.
Dude do you anything hanging below your legs a few comments and you change the story I understand you wanna give a good story but do it your own way.
I'm disappointed in you for going back on that. The herd idea was fantastic because it fit. And then... you change it. Doesn't matter now... what's done is done. I'm going to keep reading but, I just feel you should have continued along with the original idea.
You just lost my respect man. I absolutely loved the herd idea changing a chapter that brings this much character progression and finally closed the arc that Peter and Luna have had since the first story. This disappoints me it kind of shows how much integrity you have for your stories instead of sticking with your guns you throw them down. To quote the greatest movie ever "you make me sad so be it come Patsy"
To be fair, i can imagine ol' Petey being a bit old fashioned, and being a one mare kinda guy. However, i can tell you, that the edit was unnecessary, unless it had no real contribution to fhe story or his feelings later. It would have been useless fluff/fantasy/OoC.
If it added more, or would have been explored/talked about later, I can see it sticking around. However, wasn't that the point of the House of Parker supposed to be for? A what-if?
In any case, at the end of the day, it is your decision. Let the peanut gallery be peanuts and continue your craft.
P.S. Apologies for weird cap choices and in concise word usage. Hard to type a message on a 5 year old cell.
Wow, everyone in the comments is being finicky as Hell over this. Why all the salt? Is the triangle that important?
Awww. I liked the herd idea.
Are you not upset with the idea he put the idea in the story but then he takes it away come on I'm mad over that and so are a lot of other people he just took away one of the greatest Twist of the story away and now he's about to lose a lot of people that like the story because he might do it again
Huh I never saw any of those hate comments for that idea in that chapter. Where were they? And why aren't those haters speaking about it here right now?
Dude you gave us a choice a couple stories back to choose how peter ended up and we won the vote with Luna being in his family.
Why did you back out?
Please go back and fix it.
It did not need to be change
4004062 That's for a what-if story, remember? That's still in the works as we speak.
4003948 No hate. This was a change entirely on my part.
4003408 Everyone's assuming this was because of hate. Seriously. No hate came. I'm happy with that. However, it's just that the herd thing just didn't feel... natural to me. That's the truth. This IS my way.
Seriously, why let the fans vote for Luna joining the Parker family if you're just going to back out of it? That really is a bit of a slap to the reader's face. Don't give us a vote, if that's not your style. I can totally understand your feelings. It's your story; do with it what you will. But don't let us vote or decide things if your just going to go back on it later.
4006706 That was for a what-if SIDE STORY. That's still being made for many reasons, and I mentioned that then. Luna and Peter is still happening, just in a side story as it was originally intended.
4008151
Ah, my apologies for misreading that. Glad to know the side story is happening, just a little blind-sided by the sudden change. "If it ain't broke, why fix it."
4008250 No problems. I expected that people would be upset at the change, but I just felt like it needed to happen. It's the more mature and natural route to go. Sadly, the mature route is rarely the beloved one.
4008258
Not always no. But in the world of writing, I honestly don't believe that there is a right or wrong path to take. At some point, the story takes a life of its own. It often grows and changes in ways we don't always expect. Sometimes this means to make a few changes, but never try to force a story to go down a path it doesn't want to go. If that is the case here, then do what must be done for the sake of the story. Let the story flow.
4008261 That's why I did it. I legit just believe this is the route the story needs to go in order to end properly.