Keep on rollin' along · 11:47pm Apr 7th, 2016
Well, Chapter 4 of Hunting Season is up. I'm still not sure what to call what the princesses do to Hopper. "Dirty talk to orgasm" was the best I could come up with; of course, the ultimate factor is "Celestia brainfucking to sweeten the pot on her offer." My conception of Celestia includes her sharply pointing at you with fierce-orgasm face and hoofing herself off, going, "That's it. Show mama that sweet, sweet look of dawning realization," and I can't recall whether or not I've used those lines. I probably will/will again at some point.
I've got a decent backlog, though I'm still certain that some unexpected error is somewhere in Chapter 4 or something. At the pre-party snuggle and talk section, I know I need to clean up the descriptions a bit (Chapter 5), and introducing the parents in Chapter 6 is just awkward. From there on out, I feel pretty secure, though. Can't wait to see what people think of the Surprise in the After Party (Chapter 7), though.
