removed stories · 7:35am Mar 6th, 2016
I removed Bahamut queen of dragons along with skies the limit, and depublished her daughter and child of the night: twilight of the night guard.
I did this in response to several negative comments on every single story, plus with night guard and her daughter I was stumped as to where to go with them (the flaw in writing by the seat of your pants). I am in the midst of writing an outline to see if using outlines and planning everything else out will help, if it does I plan on re writing everything not at the sametime but one after another as I have found it difficult keeping up with several stories so I will be focusing solely on convergence at first(name is subject to change) (hie/poe hybrid anthro style ponies basic premise is Twilight creating a more efficient and better spell for long distance group teleportation and the at the sametime the cern super hadron collider is being used resulting in the merging of ponies humans gryphons dragons and zebra together creating anthros and the two planets equestria and earth in the process.)
NOOOOOO!!!!!
Bahamut Queen of the Dragons was EPIC!!!
WHY?!?!
3793783 it's not gone forever I still have it on my gdocs
3793785 Oh, so, what, a large scale re-write, or what?
3793790 eventual large scale rewrite.
damnit, i was planning on reading those.
3793795 SWEET!!!!!!!
3793796 sorry scorch I just sick of the negative comments on how my writing is shit despite my best efforts.
3793818 well i cant say anything about your writing as i haven't read anything by you yet though i do hope you bring them back as they sounded very interesting, and if your writing as issues track down a proof reader or an editor.
3793822 fact is I have had an editor and proof reader since I published all those fics and it still wasn't good enough tell you what i'll pm the links to the gdocs so you can see them. which were you specifically interested in?
are you going to republish child of the night: twilight of the night guard in the future?
3793828 basically the ones you removed.
3793829 yes I did say I would.
i like her duaghter and night guard one, i read them both monthly away hope for updates, i understand why, one reason why i never post any of my story, mainly great at open it up then get trap in where buck to go with it and negative comment and kill because some people have to have thing they way and make sure it happen...... good luck, and i shall wait for new rewrite to be publish, you one of my favor writers.
3794053 thank you for your support.
3794067 your most welcome,
but but but but...... night guard and Her daughter are some of y favorite stories.
3794545 they aren't gone forever.
3794545 its still POSSIBLE to get to that particular story and maybe the others as well but its a rather out of the way method i have the actual story page on my book mark list as i do with all stories i added to my favorites so long as the story isnt actually deleted there will always be a way to get to it such as they still readily show up on a few stories in the also liked little side tab
3794627 when will you republish child of the night: twilight of the night guard? It was such a great story
3815212 when I'm completely finished with convergence(title work in progress)
3815617 how long do you estimate that will take?
3815648 I don't know really it could be a couple of months as so far I have only outlined three chapters.
3815694
but that means night guard will take af least a year
3815697 well think about it like this i will be rewritting it and I will be improving it plus if I get convergence finished I can then focus solely on it.
3815697 so what if it takes a year for neo to start back up on night guard i actually dont care how long it takes so long as its still recognizable as the story i started reading
3817017 don't worry night gaurd won't change drastically, it'll most likely get reworded and pacing fixes.
neokiva i think you should just ignore bad comments and write it the way the way you want to
Tbh, Night Guard and Her Daughter were good. Really, you just needed to take out some of the nonsensical stuff. For example, for Her Daughter you could remove the stuff with Blueblood and Spike and rewrite the stuff with Cadance and Twilight to make it not as sudden
3959172 THANK YOU!! What she said.
3990789 It was good that way.
Do you think you could pm me the link to her daughter?
3815757 any news on child of the night: twilight of the night guard?
4142345 still busy with other story
4142348 OK. Just thought I'd ask
4043953
Maybe, but when a story adds too many side plots, with little to no reason, it takes away from the main plot of the story. The story had like 5 or 6 different side plots on top of the main plot. Twilight of the Night Guard was starting to go that way as well.
4256989 not in my opinion. More side plots the more content.
sorry for bugging you but do you know when you'll bring back Child of the night: Twilight of the Night guard???
4295480 honestly at this point I don't know.
4295840 oh okay thank you for letting me know
3817031 Doesn't deleting it mean you can't republish it unless the mods bring it back up again? I think rewrites are usually just put on Hiatus cause you can't repost deleted stories.
4496727 it's not deleted.