Braking her stallion in Review series · 5:48am Jan 18th, 2016
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/125327/breaking-her-stallion-in
This Fan Fiction is part of a 3 story series one in which I can never get the image of the 2 main characters Gender swapped (r63) thanks to a broadcast that was done months ago.
This particular story takes place in high school and is quite interesting to say the least. Now I could go into detail of what happens but that would ruin the whole story as there really isn't much that can be explained other thank horny teen's one being rich and bratty and the other being nerdy and socially awkward.
Seeing as the placement is in a school you can take pot shots at where the main scenes are at.
The next story Shining Armor's Assault on Cadence Keep takes place in the crystal empire's crystal castle and is a RP (role play) heavy story and does a good job of setting the story in motion with a nice bit of side character lines for a good laugh.
now there is more in this story to be sure but it still doesn't need much explaining as far as the characters are concerned. Cadence RP's the sorceress of a male kingdom while Shining Armor RP's the valiant Knight on a quest to rid the kingdom of its evil ruler. Now that is not a spoiler if you have ever watched any action adventure show it has the same plot (no pun intended) regardless of if its a feature length film or a TV series.
The third and final story Missing Her Stallion is a solo story meaning that is a 1 character story and its got some meat on it but not much the story it self does all the explaining I could do for it but it also leaves some bits to be explained.
My guess is that this Fan Fiction takes place maybe a few months or even a few years after the wedding (though only the author could confirm or deny that theory) but what is certain is that its not long after high school unless they have a extremely high sex drive even after they have been together for a few years (some couples are at it for nearly a decade or longer even after they have kids)
But cadence is sexually frustrated and all that's left for her to do while she waits is a piece of plastic or other royal duties.
Either way the author has given us another set of good readings to past the time for an hour or two.
7/10
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