Taming the Mane-Iac coment and review · 11:59am Feb 26th, 2019
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SFW site side Tameing the Mane-Iac Google doc version with NSFW pics
ok so first off my comment:
WHERE THE FUCK IS THE SQUEAL!!!! This is too much of a cliff hanger.
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My review:
Were to start.. so this takes play after the events of the power pony episode after episode 100 of the show where they get the crystal palace. Anyway time scale aside lets get onto the content. For about 2 chapters there is A LOT of meat on the bones for this. As I don't like to spoil anything much if I can help it I'll try and be as detailed as I can with out spoiling much.
This stars 3 characters Spike, the Mane Iac, and Twilight with mention of Rarity. Though Twilight is kind of a side character that shows up near the end of chapter 2. They main focus is on how Spike falls for Mane Iac, and how Spikes initial intention was for using "Power Pony Magically Enhanced Edition" was to learn how Radiance reacted to his advances and if shit hit the fan he could just reset from the start of the comic all over again until he got the outcome he wanted. Welp Spike rolled a 1 on his concentration check and took a fork in the road and started a log on the Mane Iac. Which leads into a night of passionate fun, a bit of LIGHT humiliation to brake down some emotional walls, a heavy helping teasing, a dash of intellectual exchange.
That said I wish there was more to this Fan fiction as well as a squeal to boot as it leaves the reading on a cliff hanger at the end of chapter 2. Disappointing as that may be as this is over 3 years old and even more so assuming anyone even reads my reviews or even glances at them Fat chance if I even get one person to even stumble on these reviews but I digress. This story has extreme potential to become a multi story universe assuming that the dirtly little secret intends to do so. I would personally love to see this evolve and expanded on in later stories.
Well done and a pleasant read 9/10
