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  • 13 weeks
    an update

    Hi all. I hope everyone is doing well. I've been taking an extended break from FimFiction lately. Had some undesirable interactions with some users. That coupled with some of my creative frustrations just makes logging on... kind of unpleasant? If I do log on, it's usually to try and catch up with the fics I'm reading and then I quickly log off. I'm just feeling drained with the MLP fanfic

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  • 18 weeks
    holidays '23

    Writing updates. Chattin' up about life. Not a dense post, but get it after the jump.

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  • 20 weeks
    35

    It was my birthday yesterday! I'd meant to post the day of, but honestly, I was so tired and busy I just didn't have much time or energy to sit at my computer. Wanna hear a funny story or two, plus see the new playlist I made for Sassaflash? Get it after the jump!

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  • 21 weeks
    ponies fix everything

    New chapter for What They Hope to Find is out! I talk about what's next after the jump, but before that, a quick anecdote:

    Last night, my family was having trouble finding something to watch together. My nine-year-old son didn't have any ideas, but he pretty much shot down every suggestion we had. Eventually, out of frustration and half-serious, I say, "Let's just watch ponies."

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  • 21 weeks
    Jinglemas! And Rarijack!

    I'm participating in this year's Jinglemas! It's a cute fic exchange that happens every year. I requested a rare pair ship, three guesses which. :twilightsheepish: Today is the last day to join, so if you want in on it, be sure to read over the rules and PM Shakespearicles!

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Jan
13th
2016

Help for Mature Equestria Girls FlutterDash Fic? · 7:16am Jan 13th, 2016

Story Name: Interdependence (Working Title)

Genres/Tags: Romance, Drama, Equestria Girls, Sex, Sad (this last one is a maybe, simply because of the intense emotional stuff I'm aiming for. Doesn't really mean the story has a sad ending, though.)

Current Length: 17,492 words (or approx. 82 printer pages.)

Projected Total Length: 64,000 words? I'm aiming for 3-4k words each chapter, though this isn't a hard rule. I have 15 chapters outlined, but I've already had to split one into two, and I may tweak the story's course (which of course affects its length.)

Projected Release Date: Anytime before Valentine’s Day for the prologue and first chapter!

Summary: The Equestria Girls have gone on to college. They are in their sophomore year and have drifted apart, struggling with their diverging paths in life. Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy in particular are suffering from personal crises. Rainbow Dash because she's about to lose her scholarship, get kicked off the soccer team, and face abandonment from her narcissistic father. Fluttershy because she's struggling to find a way to make her talents work in a seemingly unforgiving adult world. Rainbow Dash comes up with a desperate scheme: leverage Shy's crush on her to skip out on a mandatory project in favor of focusing on sports. Do things go according to plan? No. Of course not. After all, falling in love was never supposed to be a part of the plan.

Pacing: Very gradual. There's a lot of emphasis on heightening sexual tension and raising the stakes for the external conflicts.

Help Needed: I welcome general plot feedback and the usual SPaG corrections. I try to get what I can, but truth be told, I have room for improvement. I am working on it, though. If you have an idea of how campus life is like, especially sorority houses, dorm living, and athletics, then that's a bonus. Another great thing would be if helpers had knowledge of psychology concepts. It's a major theme of the story. Off the top of my head, I've been told I have issues with adverbs, descriptors, and my syntax could use with improvement.

Additional Comments: I've been writing for many years. On a technical level, I'm aware of my shortcomings. If you're patient with me, I'll try and work to minimize any recurring mistakes. It's a new year, and I bought an advanced grammar course off Udemy, lol. Also, I'm writing the story on this writing program called Scrivener. I haven't found a way to streamline the formatting yet, so the process of transferring my work to google docs is a weensy bit slow. So far I have just the prologue and first chapter on google, but I've already started chapter 5 on Scrivener.

My pipe dream was to release 2 updates a week once the story is posted. This was just a hope, not a requirement.

If you're interested or have questions, just post them here or PM me! Once we've gotten on the same page in terms of expectations, I'll send you the G-Docs link.

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