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GreyGuardPony


Just a simple pegasister who likes world building.

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  • 268 weeks
    Grey Guard Pony passed away on 12/7/2018.

    Sorry, I'm Zalabar; a friend who was asked to spread the word. Somehow I didn't think of posting here. Instead it was... well, direct message to the few we both knew. Phyco put up a blog on it back in December; https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/838448/dust-in-the-wind

    It was the cancer, and GGP passed in their sleep.

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  • 302 weeks
    Not Dead....Yet

    My apologies for the prolonged radio silence coming from this account. It's been a rough past couple of months.

    Fuck cancer so hard.

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    9 comments · 1,250 views
  • 329 weeks
    New Rainsverse Fic!

    Just giving my followers who enjoy the Rainsverse a heads up. The next fic in that AU has passed the que and is now available to start reading.

    In this one, we begin to delve into the fallout of Chroma's attack on The Heartlands and the fate of the Everfree Rangers in particular. If you're interested in seeing what happens next, go give it a look!

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  • 331 weeks
    Writing Lessons: Blood and Ponies

    ...This fic exhausted me.

    If there is one over-arching lesson I learned from this little crossover is that having a plan for your story, even if you end up deviating from it, is important. It gives you at least a loose guide that you can follow and for someone with ADD having something that can help keep you on focused and on track ends up being really important.

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  • 341 weeks
    Weird Stores

    I had a medical appointment today and saw two of the weirdest stores I ever have on the way to and from the appointment.

    On the way out I passed Valhalla: Indoor Axe Throwing.

    On the way back I passed Break Room: Therapeutic Demolition.

    It is now a goal in my life to visit both of these stores out of sheer, morbid curiosity.

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Jan
11th
2016

You know you're getting better as a writer.... · 1:33am Jan 11th, 2016

....when you look at your old work and realize, "....Wow, my dialogue punctuation looks like shit!"

I feel oddly proud about this.

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Comments ( 4 )

Prepare the Re-write Engines!

Oddly? You're right to be proud! growing as any type of artist is a great thing. A lot of people look at art and don't realize just how hard it is to make something great until they actually try it for themselves. Writing is an especially hard form of art, being as you can't just put down what you're visualizing. Visual and verbal art take a lot of work, but verbal art has so many freaking rules to it.... And to properly describe something while following those rules is just a nightmare. I'v scrapped so may ideas..... Well, you're doing great and i'm glad to read your work.

I understand how you feel. I occasionally look at my notes for rpg campaigns years ago and shudder at the thin stories and overly hamhanded plothooks.:facehoof:

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Hehe. Perhaps not full re-writes right now. But I do think that the dialogue punctuation needs to be fixed.

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I think you nailed it there. Writing is an art that you just got to keep working on to get better at. It's nice to realize that you're getting to that point. And you? You just gotta keep working on getting better. Don't give up!

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Heh. Yeah. >.>....My old RPG campaigns probably aren't any better.

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