A General Update on the Story · 10:24pm Dec 2nd, 2015
First of all, I would like to say thanks to each and every one of you who faved and/or followed this story. It means a lot to me as an author. And my dream is to have this story hit a thousand likes by the time I finish it. I'll try to think of something special to do for that milestone, maybe a big commission from Natasha. I'm going to start on the next chapter tomorrow, and will hopefully have it out soon. But no promises, as finals are approaching rapidly. After the page break there may be some minor spoilers as to what will be in the story, but nothing too major.
So? What should I talk about next? I think I'll go with the fetishes currently listed in the author's notes of the first chapter.
Triggers this will contain without a doubt:
Futa, magically induced genderswapping(definitely female to male, maybe male to female, but it won't be against their will), bukkake, gangbang/orgy, anal, huge penis, just generally excessive proportions, cum inflation, domination/submission, pet play, bondage, cock worship, ass worship, hotdogging, just generally lots of ass stuff, rough sex, toys, outfits, magically induced aging up(only Spike is 100% for this), incest, exhibitionism, sensory denial, orgasm denial, squirting, growth/expansionTriggers this may contain (various degrees of possibility, the list is in no particular order)
Cock milking/lactation, tentacles, goo, role play, food play, Futa-on-male, nipple/teat play, public play(not! public use), some degree of realism(hah!)Triggers this will not have
M/M, Hyper growth, muscle growth, weight play(fat), pregnancy, breath play, Rape, foalcon, vore, gore, blood play, age/diaper play, scat, watersports, bestiality, necrophilia, and other things similar to these
This has changed some since I first posted it, and will probably change some more as I continue writing. Most likely in regards to M/M, public use, and impregnation/pregnancy. Hyper growth is in a weird spot for me, at some point I want to try writing it, but for now I'll leave it where it is. So I'll update this list soon. But the other things in the 'not have' section are pretty much there to stay.
Now, onto the rough plan for the rest of the chapters in the story.
Chapter 6 - Twilight and Rainbow talking, clop scene involves Twilight and r63 Rainbow Dash
Chapter 7 - Applejack's induction into the harem. Clop scene involves Twilight, Rainbow, Pinkie, and AJ
Chapter 8 - Spikes induction into the harem. Clop scene involves Twilight and Spike
Chapter 9 - Rarity's induction into the harem. Clop scene involves Twilight, Rarity, and Spike
Chapter 10 - More Twilight and Rainbow Talking. Clop scene involves Twilight and Rainbow turned into griffons
Chapter 11 - Fluttershy's induction into the harem. Clop scene involves Twilight, Fluttershy, and Rainbow.
Chapter 12 - After much deliberation (maybe with myself) I've decided to add Chrysalis into the mix. Which is where the impregnation and pregnancy fetish comes in.
Chapter 13 - Big fat orgy
And that is the end of the first arc of this story. All the clop scenes are subject to change if I come up with an idea I like better. I still don't have one I'm totally in love with for fluttershy for example. I'm debating whether or not to release the second one in a separate story, but I have a decent amount of time to think about what I want to do.
Now lets talk about the second arc of the story. This is where I'm going to have some of the secondary cast of the show come in. I'm going to put the current list down below this in spoilers for those of you who want to be surprised. The list is also in order.
Big Mac and Braeburn, Cadance and Shining Armor, Luna, Celestia, Trixie
Everyone in that list will appear, but that does not mean that I am opposed to adding more ponies. But bear in mind I have considered pretty much all of them at some point. As much as I love certain ponies, I'm not going to cram them into the story just because of that. Also know that I'm going to have a third arc that is going to have basically anything that I feel like writing in this universe. So its always possible to have a pony appear there instead.
I think thats about it. If you have any questions regarding the story ask them in the comments. No matter how spoilery, I'll be sure to answer them. I'll put my answers in spoilers however, so people don't accidentally read them.
Thats it for now,
Gold4tune out, pce /)
I do feel like AJ isn't quite inducted of her own will if the last chapter is anything to go by, but that's really my only quibble and it's one that could end up being null and void very easily as the story goes on. Definitely looking forward to seeing this progress.
Also, double vaginal. Think about it.
You don't have Fluttershy joining the ranks, and for some reason, I imagine the 6 of them along with a set of "improved" elements being used to convince Luna and/or Celestia to join.
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In response to you not thinking AJ is being inducted of her own will. That is certainly something that I was thinking about it as I planned it out and wrote it. But in the end, I'll explain it like this: All that Molly did was transmit what was happening to Applejack. She didn't force her to be turned on by it. Sort of in the same way you'll look at a porn video, and while it is clearly sexual in some regard, you may just not be turned on by it. Its the same thing here. Is it kinda in a gray area? Yeah, it is. This will be explained more in the next chapter, but I think thats a good summary.
I'll call your double vaginal, and raise you double anal! Lets just say Twilight is a big pony compared to the other main 6, and if they all serve her at the same time, they may have to share a few things.
Enjoyed everything so far, and now I'm even more interested to see how things play out as this progresses further. Also, finals are still as terrible as ever.
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Thats a mistake on my part, she's definitely joining the harem.
And Luna and Celestia will join without the assistance of possibly corrupted magical artifacts. Don't worry about that.
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Ah, jolly good. I figured it'd be pretty easy to address. Carry on!
Also, I raise you triple vaginal! I have never seen a story with it and there's hardly any pics of it on Derpibooru. Explore those uncharted territories!
I thought hyper growth was already in the fic when Twilight thought that making her cock bigger with magic was easier than thrusting (to be fair for her it is) in her autofellatio scene. Then again I'm not that into hyper either (though by no means opposed to it) so maybe that's not enough to count?
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I always get confused between hyper and macro. But, Ino reference to the blog I meant one pony's entire body being magically sized up to be much larger than normal. Not only Twilight's cock.
3587978 Ah I getcha now. Though to be fair to you I think I've seen whole body macro tagged as hyper before. lot of overlap with the two I suppose.
Also, I mentioned this in a PM, but I think a novel thing would be someone turning them down. Like, all these harem stories go the same way: Character X needs a harem because legal reasons or magic, proceeds to seduce everyone and their mother. Having someone say, "No" for whatever reason(not into girls, asexual, just not comfortable with group relationships) would set you apart.
I originally said one of the Mane Six, but now I'm thinking maybe Cadance and Shining Armor? I know, I know: "But she's the princess of love, so of COURSE she's into every fetish known to mankind and is a total slut and Shining is fine because why not?!" Maybe having one of the two canon married couples being actually faithful to their vows would be refreshing.
ANd besides, the Cakes are Best Swingers...
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Quite literally in most cases.
I actually didn't really expect this to go down the harem route if I'm honest and I reckon it'd be interesting if there are some that decline as well. Or maybe even the harem ends up bringing 2 ponies together and they split off to be a couple, who knows. Just something to mix up the formula a bit.
Will Asmodeus appear here at all, or different universe?
wait, so M/M will or will not appear? I hope not. Not a fan of it.
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I have actually put a lot of thought into that. And basically it boils down to how I want to balance the story and the clop. If I were to make Shining and Cadance not be part of the harem, although their 'membership' is going to be more of a once in a while thing. I would lose a lot of clop scenes that I want to write. So it puts me in this weird position where I know story wise one thing is better, but it limits me in other ways. So in simplest terms possible, it's a fight between my brain and my dick, which is probably more intense than it should be.
I actually thought about having a couple form in the harem and then split off, and am probably going to have this be the case with two of the members. Who while not leave entirely, definitely not be as active participants. Also remember that this fic is Twilight's first exposure to this whole other world. and Twilight being Twilight, she wants to explore it in its entirety. Eventually she'll settle down a bit.
And I should have made this clearer, but M/M does have a strong possibility of appearing in this fic. My tastes in clop have expanded since starting this fic, and I now think I can write it properly. Muscle growth however is still on the 'no' list however, sorry.
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It will probably show up in the second arc of the story. But the way I look at it, there's enough clop in this story that skipping one clop scene, while disappointing, isn't too big of an impact
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Maybe in a bonus chapter or the third arc. But its not currently planned.
Yay! You have reconsidered your position for pregnancy/impregnation! As well as m/m! Such a. Great day is this!
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I was never really against it in the first place. Its just that if i made the main 6 the ones who went through it, there would be a lot of other things I would have to do in the story. Twilight impregnating one of her friends is something that deserves its own story, and I don't want to cram it into this one. With the addition of the ponies in the second arc, two in particular, it makes it so that I can have impregnation/pregnancy in this fic, without having to go through all of the other things that it would entail. Does that makes sense? Let me know if it doesn't and i'll try to explain it better.
3591257 Oh yes. You make perfect sense. And I understand you were not against it, but for this story we were not expecting it, but now it will be here that makes it even better. I must say I am thoroughly excited.
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Sadly, it is still going to be a while till I end up writing it. But if its any consolation, I am looking forward to it.