Second Princess of the Night Cross Post and Night Walker Name Update · 5:32pm Nov 23rd, 2015
Just a small update here mostly aimed for those still reading the story before chapter 16ish. I've finally settled on changing the name Nathaniel Moon to Midnight Trail and I will be implented that change now, so hopefully it isn't confusing all of a sudden. I've also redone the short intro on chapter one where we see Night Walker first come out of his cave. Looking back at previous chapters I get cringy at how edgy I was trying to make Night Walker, and I toned it down a bit on possible the most cringe worthy intro I've ever written. I'm tempted to go through the series again to fix that in addition to another polish session for grammar, but I'll stick with the single intro change I've made and save that project until after the story is complete.
As for the second part of this blog, I am now posting Second Princess of the Night on Fanfiction.net, so if anyone sees it over there and yells, "Oi!", don't worry, no one is stealing it. It's just me.
Now, regarding for when the new chapter will come out, as per my previous blog, I'm focusing on finishing an animatic first so I can release it hopefully early December, and I can't promise a new chapter will come out before then. Thanks to those reading this for waiting patiently and I'm sorrry I haven't delievered as much as I hinted that I would. This deployment is a bit different than the last one (I'm actually doing work this time!) so the days are a little more tiring mentally. Have a good day all.
The name change is probably not a bad idea. I remember that one made me do a little bit of a double take when I came across it. Not really all that bad, but it clashes a bit with the setting. I like the new version better, even if it's a bit generic. I also like to imagine that a smart vampire would give himself aliases like Happy Sunshine or something like that.
Then again, they're silly pony vampires. They're supposed to be edgy.
I had been thinking about a good name for Nathaniel as well, so I'm glad to hear that's been resolved. Gonna have to read the intro again, I didn't think of it as cringy, but I suppose it would be a different story for the author, kinda like how appearing in front of a crowd makes every little mistake stand out, but the audience doesn't notice anything wrong at all.