I was looking for some editing help on my stories, including the next chapter of Asylum, and I was also looking for some feedback on the stories in general to help me nail down some pernicious issues I've been facing.
Please PM me if you're willing and able to help. And let me offer my thanks ahead of time, because I do appreciate it all!
So, years ago I actually started writing out a guide of random but mostly useless information about Asylum and Broadhoof after I received permission from folks to write fan-fiction based on my fan-fiction. It was a humbling but invigorating experience. So in my exuberance, I decided that I should craft something that would help provide the reader a more coherent world for their shared narrative.
We will live again in freedom in the garden of the Lord We will walk behind the plough shed We put away the sword The chain will be broken and all men will have their reward
Will you join in our crusade? Who will be strong and stand with me? Somewhere beyond the barricade Is there a world you long to see? Do you hear the people sing? Say, do you hear the distant drums? It is the future that they bring When tomorrow comes!
We will live again in freedom in the garden of the Lord
We will walk behind the plough shed
We put away the sword
The chain will be broken and all men will have their reward
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The world is a strange and dangerous place. A place i have long cease understanding.
Eeyup, and may the victims be remembered.
This morning, all my friends checked on me to see if I was still alive. That's a weird way to start a day...
Thank y'all for your support.
France owns 50 megatons of artificial sunrise.
Will you join in our crusade?
Who will be strong and stand with me?
Somewhere beyond the barricade
Is there a world you long to see?
Do you hear the people sing?
Say, do you hear the distant drums?
It is the future that they bring
When tomorrow comes!