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One of the Crowd


<---- Drawn by mix-up. All I have to say is disappearing is easier when its a crowd of people that are exactly like you.

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  • 324 weeks
    Wow...it's been awhile.

    So I guess the lot of you want to know where I've been. Why did I drop off the map without so much as a word right? Well I've been moving on with my real life with my actual job and friends and the like. This got put on the back burner and almost forgotten entirely because I just didn't care to check up on it as much sense writing wasn't so much fun anymore. To those of you that have tried

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    Yay, I'm older now!

    Just one more year until I am 20... :facehoof: I have nothing to show for the last 19 years of my life.

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  • 392 weeks
    I'm just gonna leave this here

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  • 413 weeks
    Explanation.

    Remember how I said I'd stop procrastinating? Well I did and sat down to start writing something for you all! Then I drew a blank! I couldn't think of anything at all! I'm sorry to those of you that wanted to see something new or something to be updated, but I felt I should let you all know. I'm sorry.

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  • 414 weeks
    Time to stop procrastinating.

    I finally feel like writing and have the time (not at the immediate time) to actually work on a story! This have the question though, which do I work on first? If you guys want to pick out one of my stories your like to see get moving already then let me know. Until I get clear answers the order will be

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Oct
8th
2015

That moment when you realize... · 12:36am Oct 8th, 2015

...You've bitten more off than you could chew. My last two blogs have been about that choose your on adventure story; well I'm working on it, but I've only now realized how much work is going to go into it...it's a lot. So would anyone like to help me create the story or something.:twilightblush: I know what I'm asking is stupid, but I don't think I can finish it entirely anytime soon without any help. If anyone's interested just leave a comment and let me know what you would like to help with. Pre-readers, co-authors, Polite critiques, etc. Just say what you;d like to help with if you want to. Everyone that helps will of course get a shout out. :facehoof: I'm sorry if I sound desperate or needy.

For those of you that have agreed to help and would like to see what's down so far click here.I'll give you the password when you ask for it and are certain you wish to help. Thanks again.:twilightsmile:

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I can give you all the avenue of the story could go, but that is pretty much the same as The Other Button

3451158 That could possibly help, but again it's an interactive story with a lot of different things that could happen. Helping me come up with a unique way to go with each species would be helpful however. If you're still interested I'll tell you what it's sort of about.

3451128 Great! What can you do to help?

3451448 could you discrive me what is an interactive story? just to be sure that it is what I think it is. I could help on a few the different branches of the story if you at lest map out some of it to get the juice flowing.

3451488 An interactive story is when I just type out a small chapter with a description of what is happening and at the end I place a link to a chapter of your choice of what to do. Think about it like you can choose for the character to go through a door or to continue down a hallway.

As for what the story is it's going to be a second person POV( Don't hate me) that will take place in some ruins in the everfree. All those species that I wanted in that blog post are all the possible main characters. Which is why I'm asking for the help here because it's a lot of characters which mean a lot of choices.

3451494 well this could be a good practice for me to write a story for myself, I would be interested with the following sens they seem like fun to do.

Goat

Donkey ( this one really sound like fun, it is sham that there is no HiE like this, also I have seen one who was a cow, it was funny)

Mule

Hippogriph

Sea pony

I'd like to help, any role you need me for will probably be fine.

...I would help, I really would
but I kinda want to read this story without spoilers.
also it seems like you already got Mix-up and Eon333MS helping out.

if you need a few fun characters, I have a couple i'm not using.
such as
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Polly Petals
A breezie for the last time the breezies where in town. unfortunately a strong gust of wind took her away form the group when no one was watching. that would not had been a too much of a problem, if she hadden't lost all of the pollen she was suppose to carry.
worried about ruining her perfect record of being the one breezie who had never once lost any of her pollen (let alone all of it. oh my god, a breezie who lose's all her pollen, could you imagine the shame?) she, in a desperate attempt to gather more pollen, thought maybe some of these new blue flowers could act as a pollen substitute
she was wrong
now she's been cursed and can no longer speak/understand her language (not even the bugs understand her or tell her the way out of this scary forest) and has no idea where the way back home is
oh if only she didn't listen to her foolish pride

Polly is a prideful breezie, being voted most likely to succeed, and not be scared of hawks
to the breezies she was a child prodigy, a rising star with a lot to gain but everything to lose (at least that's how she saw it)
she never passes up an opportunity to talk about how amazing she is back home or how great her home is, though secretly she's a bit scared/sad to go back home a failure and will be a bit hesitant in returning, but good luck getting her to admit to that
although if she did come back with something so great and amazing she would have to be welcomed back a hero, if a situation like that were to arise, there'd be no stopping from trying get home with said thing (just kidding, she's still a breezie, those things could be stopped with a butterfly net)

last things.
She now speaks the language of the Minotaurs (AKA Spanish) ...idk maybe the main character is bilingual or something
my head cannon is the breezies can talk to bugs

if you want anymore characters just ask and I'll write them up in that fashion.

3451450 Get permission to use a guy's OC and include him in a super Smash Bros Crossover.

3451905 I wasn't looking for too many characters though that does leave a possibility for the breezie's story. This is an interactive second person story too so the only real spoilers is knowing a few choices ahead of time. Other spoilers would be if you wrote one of the character stories for me which is one of the bigger helps. Everyone that does this get's credit of course.

3451551 I'm looking for any role to be filled really. The main thing that I could use would be other authors to take over some of the story characters. ie. there are a lot for me to write so taking a few off would be a mercy to me.

3451502 :yay: all of those were going to be hard to write for me! thank you so much. Don't worry you'll get credit for everything you do, I promise.

3452014 ...OCs are not the biggest help to me, but I wont turn them away as they can offer interaction for the main character.

3452075 Maybe you can use my OC George Cunningham?

3452101 Not really. The only human is the main character and that's you. Maybe I can use him for a trap? That might actually be a good idea.

3452104 What I mean is that the story is going to have lots of traps. George is a cunning and tricky individual. I could use him to lure the main character into certain traps for specific reasons.

Comment posted by The Mysterious Lombax deleted Oct 8th, 2015

3452113 ...This is for one of my stories, and the main six aren't really in it. I'm not stopping you from writing that story, but I'm saying that I couldn't include it in this one because of the story arc. (Or should I say arcs?)

3452120 OK, but who would be in the story with George Cunningham?

3452121 I don't know. If he ends up here he's just going to be setting up traps and just being a general nuisance to the protagonist. If he's in your story then it's completely up to you.

3452126 Alright. I think I'll put him in the draconaquus story arc.

So what sort of story is thins going to be? is it supposed to be an other HiE who turns into one of all the different species and you give him a set of choice actions that they can do?

3452129 eeyup.:eeyup:

Link to what I got so far is in the blog. I'll Pm you the password for you to critique it.

SQA

I'd like to help, but if I'm honest with the amount of stuff I gotta go these days it'd probably never actually do it. If you are still seeking applicants in about a month or so (after marching band ends for me) I'd be down and probably actually be able to help. In the meantime, best of luck and I look forward to what you've got in store!

3454222 It's going to be awhile before it's done. So I might ask for your help in that month after all.

SQA

3454228 Sounds good to me! Because this actually sounds like it'd be a ton of fun.

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