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  • 232 weeks
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    It's weird knowing this is the first year I don't have pony episodes to look forward too... but I digress.

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    S.P.I.K.E What's it Spell?

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  • 237 weeks
    New Story Being Posted Today/Tomorrow

    So, depending on your time zone depends on which of those is true, but in about 12-15 hours I'll be submitting my one shot.

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  • 238 weeks
    Writing on My New Story Done!

    So yeah, 11k words and 43 pages later! Now the editing can begin and then the posting.

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  • 239 weeks
    Update to a One-Shot

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Aug
1st
2012

This is gonna be good. · 8:42pm Aug 1st, 2012

First, I hate myself for that. Second the newly updated first chapter of Spike and His Six Lovely Ladies is up! About 1500 words of added content most of it in the sex scenes.

This is the major none sex scene addition,

“Now, that’s not fair, Rarity; you’re a big part of your success too.” She knew how much Spike had helped, not to this extent though, but she also knew how hard Rarity had worked. As usual, her friend was being a bit overly dramatic and generous with her praise. Still, she could understand where it was coming from. While Spike’s emotional support had been the tipping point of her own emotions for him, his hard work on the farm was the buildup that allowed it to happen. In the fields, her covered in sweat, him being reptilian not, the two toiled under the sun, talking about anything on their minds, his muscles bulging under the scales as he bucked a tree, or swung at it with his tail. It was something she’d always imagined, almost tradition for the Apple family mares, to find someone who was strong and had lots of stamina to help work the farm, but also someone who she could connect with and love. Her train of thought was broken by her friend continuing her speech.

It expands on Applejack's feelings and reasoning for falling in love with Spike. There is more, but I know some times rereading something feels tedious (unless it's sex) so I gave you the major change.

Now more good news! I'm doing the sexty minute prompt today, which is 90 minutes as I have to use all 6 girls, plus I choose to use Spike. It's gonna be good. I've already done the first scene in 30 mins and I plan to do 2 more. Taking a small break to get the creativity flowing again.

It will be something of a event after the end of Spike and His Six Lovely Ladies. So you should all look forward to that later tonight.

Also Weekend Maid for Spike is being worked on as well.

P.S. Shameless promotion inbound: If you happen to have forgotten to give Spike and His Six Lovely Ladies a thumbs up last time you read it, this would be a great opportunity to improve upon that moment of forgetfulness.

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Good to see the rewrite, but now for chapter 2!

264174 Bonus Chapter tonight. Very awesome bonus chapter.

264183 Good....do not disappoint.

264186 I'm extremely tempted to do a teaser sentence.

So this is a Mass Effect 3 Extended cut DLC version?

264195 I intend to. The submission time ends in 10 hours I expect to finish in the next 5 send it to Ven for quick edit, so 6-7 hours from now.

264204 Pinkie stifled a laugh. “I guess you can just call me Pinkie, Cream Pie.” She moved back a little on the table as Applejack jumped off. “So, who wants a taste?” she purred seductively.

*innocent whistle*

264210 Hold on, I thought the next chapter was Fluttershy and Rainbow. Is that later? :rainbowhuh:

264226 Fluttershy and Dash are chapter 2. IC is sill doing edits apparently... yea I know. That however is a piece of what I wrote for the sexty minute pony prompt which is "The prompt: The Mane Six all do something special together for Hearts and Hooves Day." So I decided that I could make it a tie in with SaHSLL something that would happen after the story.

1012810 I'm not going to murder him. I still need him. I'm just helping him learn to be better.

Why does everyone want my help? I'm kinda useless.

Curiosity check.

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