Aug
2nd
2015
"Phantom Pony" update · 6:44pm Aug 2nd, 2015
Yep, "The Phantom Pony of Everfree" is now entering Chapter 5! Take a look!
As for my other works, I'm sorry things are going so slowly. But the good news is, I have two new one-shots ready to post (one of which has a cover, and just needs pre-reading), so if the new chapter of "TPPoE" isn't enough to keep you busy, the one-shot with a cover should suffive for now.
I need to get back to work on "Pride of the Apples", Applejack's Steamy story, and the third "Snapped" story. I'll do those as soon as possible.
Thanks for your patience, and as always, thanks for reading! 
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LightningSword · 325 views
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#update
#new chapter
#The Phantom Pony of Everfree
YES!!
My sister will be happy when Pride of the Apples is updated.
is it ok if i give my fanfic/story to you lighting
3289530 I Don't really make it a point to take another person's story, permission or not. Not really my style as an author. But I can help you fix it, if you need me to.
3289573 yeah cause ive tried and can't get it on and the thing I got were Please remove the author's notes where you are directly addressing the reader.
You need quotation marks on your dialogue.
For the sake of readability, please be sure to begin a new paragraph whenever a new character starts speaking, such that no two characters are speaking within the same paragraph.
3289595 Well, that's no big deal. Each character's dialogue needs its own paragraph. And the Author's Notes are really not necessary unless there's something important about the fic you want to mention.
But if you need me to look at it, just post a link, and I'll see what I can do.
3289609 k http://www.fimfiction.net/story/280779/a-new-town-for-two-new-ponies-remake