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Lanafilly


I write Hopepunk stories (the opposite of grimdark), the world has felt too dark, too cynical, too jaded. Time to bring some light and hope into this world and make it all seem less bleak

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  • 419 weeks
    Reason for no update

    Hey everyone, as you might have noticed the story is back on Hiatus. The reason why is for a few things.

    First thing is Writer's block as per usual, but I was starting to work past it. For about a week or so I had been doing really good about writing at least 300 words per day, I was on a roll and was starting to work my way up from there to even more words per day.

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  • 457 weeks
    Need some help

    Hi, if you've been stalking my story comments you might have seen that I made a comment saying that I should be able to get the story out in a couple of weeks, if not sooner than that.. well.. my editor has cut all contact with me it seems like. I don't know what has happened to her, but the fact of the matter is, I need someone to help me Edit, just a single person is all I require. What the job

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  • 570 weeks
    Story Spotlight

    Okay so I was looking for some stories that I was hoping would give me inspiration to work again, and I'm SLOWLY working through chapter 2, sad to say its kicking my ass.

    Anyways I saw this story right here
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    Arcana Equestria
    ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

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  • 573 weeks
    Okay okay I get the message universe!!!!

    WHAT THE HECK!?!?! @_____@ HOW DO YOU NEW PEOPLE FAVEING THE STORY KEEP SHOWING UP?!?!

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  • 578 weeks
    I am losing motivation kind of

    I am slowly losing motivation for my story.... I think its because of all the little ideas I have running around in my head and the desire to write a bunch of short little stories, and so I think I'm going to do that, but instead of writing just MY ideas. I want to write YOUR ideas, I am opening up requests to one shot stories so I can get the desire to write for Magic is her Talent

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Jul
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2015

Need some help · 8:17pm Jul 17th, 2015

Hi, if you've been stalking my story comments you might have seen that I made a comment saying that I should be able to get the story out in a couple of weeks, if not sooner than that.. well.. my editor has cut all contact with me it seems like. I don't know what has happened to her, but the fact of the matter is, I need someone to help me Edit, just a single person is all I require. What the job of editing means in this case, is making sure my punctuation is on point, my grammar isn't too jumbled (though that thankfully doesn't happen too often) and some other things. I can give more indepth details for those that wish to contact me about it.

If you're interested in becoming my editor, just send me a PM or leave a comment down below, whichever one makes you comfortable and that you prefer.

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I wish i could help but sadly I am rather iffy with my spelling and grammar

I'm open to help, Though I'm better at phrasing and how characters think than grammar if that is okay.

I'm open to help as well. I personally like dealing with grammar that isn't my own. :twilightsheepish:

I'd be willing to help. Technically, I'm more than proficient enough to ensure grammar and such is up to snuff, and I'm well versed enough in the dynamics of telling a story that I can offer feedback on that as well, if desired. My schedule for when I can work would be erratic for the next week and a bit, but I can make time here and there to make things work. It's been a little while since I did editing work, and I'd like to get back into it.

I feel that I should clarify what it is that i'm asking... My grammar is completely up to par, if not above par, it is very rare that I am grammatically incorrect. What I DO have problems though, is punctuation, though i'm getting better at that, but i'm not too good at.. pretty much I guess you could say College level writing. I have not taken a single Class of college, though I probably should. Things that I honestly don't know too much about, like prepositional phrases (I don't even know what that means, I probably already know the definition if you told me, but I couldn't match the two up, that's for sure). I want someone who DOES understand these things, and can help point them out to me, and teach me to make less of those mistakes in the first place.

Heck I didn't know what a Hypothetical meant until my editor pointed it out to me. I mean I understand what it is, and kind of understand what to do with them, and partially know what NOT to do with them. but.. yea. Its things like that, that I need help with. I'm 22 years old, i'm not in high school English classes, and even in High school, my grammar was damn near impeccable.

Welp! new update, apparently my editor had left to the countryside in which they had ZERO internet.

So, they had no way of contacting me, now I don't know if they told me or not, but if they did, well... I forgot then, if they told me they were going someplace without interwebz...

So no need for a new editor, now I need to smack her upside the head for worrying me so much!! >.<

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Does this mean I shouldn't post anything I see as a grievous error?

3402086 is that supposed to be a pun or something? 'cause seeing you say that, I can only think of General Grievous from Star Wars...

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The word popped into my head and I felt I could use it. Though I was also thinking of Grievous Fan. Though General Grievous works too.
She does fun art.
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