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Proper Noun


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Jul
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2015

Proper Noun edits Skype silliness · 2:35am Jul 13th, 2015


So this happened when I was in a call while others were editing Lady Froey's latest chapter of Music to His Ears:

"Hey Froey, I edited the thing you posted..."

"You live here, slut. Go make your own damn drink." Vinyl forced a clamp around Octavia's left eye, holding it open by force. Octavia whimpered but didn't resist--she knew better than to fight.

Vinyl smiled in satisfaction to himself, admiring his own power over the mare for a few moments before crushing his cigarette into Octavia's open eye. She screamed, instinctively trying to pull her head back, but she was already pinned against the wall. Broken by years of similar treatment, her fight-or-flight response locked up. She couldn't hurt the pony she still thought of as her lover, and she couldn't get away any other way.

that forced force, tho


As a side note, I'm not editing on this chapter either. Still mostly on hiatus.
But apparently I still have the same brain as last year. That's good, I guess.

Comments ( 24 )

I am mildly drunk and I approve. :rainbowwild:

I guess you could say her eye was really Scratched out.

50 Shades of Scratch. More hardcore than the original.

I'm terrified for Octavia, but that's a really heavy handed approach. By the way... What the fuck did I just read?!

Alright Vinyl, You and me. I swear to god I'll kill you for what you did to her. Fuckers like you who do that don't deserve the life they're given!

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Something I sometimes do to blow off steam during the editing process. :derpytongue2:

3234155 I thought you weren't dealing with dark stuff for the time being.

3234962

I'm certainly not dwelling on it or writing superdark stories, no. Although I'm not in a good place right now. Stupid doctor's office.

This blog, though, is the same sense of humour (and situation) exhibited in a previous blog.

Note: This kind of crap is also not actually part of Froey's story.

3234983 Oh thank god. I have unfortunately yet to start on it. It's my next project, but it's starting to look like I may not be able to get to it until August...

So, that was over the top enough that I chuckled, but disturbing enough that I felt really bad about doing so.

Vinyl forced a clamp around Octavia's left eye, holding it open by force.

Synonyms include:

compel
coerce
make
constrain
oblige
impel
drive
pressure
press
bully
dragoon
bludgeon
elicit
exact
extort
wrest

3359257

Hush, I typed that not-seriously in like ninety seconds. :trollestia:

3359259 You should see the shit I produce in ninety seconds. It looks like something written by a psychotic five-year-old with a handy set of crayons. :derpytongue2:

3359257

Hee. Also, per your thesaurus:

Vinyl obliged a clamp around Octavia's left eye, holding it open by dragoon.

:trollestia:

#17 · Aug 31st, 2015 · · ·

3359268

Vinyl obliged a clamp around Octavia's left eye, holding it open by dragoon.

Well then....here we go.

3359275

Hey, you asked for this, posting on my blog late at night! :pinkiecrazy:

3359282 Touche.

3359294

can't stop giggling now. Must be the small amount of hard root beer in my system

I'm such a lightweight

3359300 Soda drunk? You must be the life of the party. :rainbowlaugh:

3359306

Hard root beer. 5.9% ABV.

And only 4 previous drinks in my entire life, so no particular tolerance built up yet.

3359431 Hey, that's good! At least you won't kill yourself with alcohol poisoning or have to drink fifty bucks worth of booze just to get a buzz.

3359579

Yep! Never said I wasn't happy with my choice in this.

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