"Mare of the Night" revisions

Just wanted to let you know that Comrade Pony and I finished making some major edits to "Mare of the Night". That is all.

Comments

[Zasyri]

Wait, like edits that are really noticeable if I re-read it? Not that I mind, it was a great story and I hope you do a follow-up or epilog, or at least another story in this setting.

[harts fire]

edits are all good but I am pretty sure my elf and every other pony here just plan want a hole story from this.

I say this is just a prequel.

[CommisarSilver]

So what was edited? I re read iit but didn't see any actual changes to the story.
Got a list?

[Comrade_Pony]

3199202
I wouldn't say extraordinarily noticeable unless you are particularly sensitive to grammar mistakes. There were also a few portions that were expanded on to be a bit clearer in what they were referring and to better show the character's thoughts and motivations. But they were only a few sentences.

[Southpaw]

3199319 Fortunately the mechanical mistakes were only noticeable, not bad enough to break immersion (for me, and I make other's documents bleed red when I edit). Judging by what you said, it sounds like this is only a minor revision.

Fun story, by the way.