A weekend maid for spike - Thoughts and Review

Well as much as I would like to say this is my first time reading this story its not, though its been over a year sense the first time I read the story and that was the last time I read this one.

So with that said this is a good one and I enjoy reading it even with the errors here and there but hey its not that easy to keep correct when you are writhing a story I should know I got a 2 that are on the back burner so to speak both over 30,000 words in less than 5 chapters and still not done oops guess I should get on that.

Anyway I loved reading this again after so long even though I had a rough idea of what had happened already but the details were fuzzy as hell. But that isn't the fault of the story in any way just my memory. You get a sense of what its like in both their minds and as someone who loves to take apart and examine things I love it. Bias aside even as I look a it with ever increasing intrests to read the other storys that make up the series though they may not be complete I can wait for the author to complete them, as I have dozens of other Fic's to read to past the time as I find even more.

WIth that said this is a Porn fiction but even then it discribes them in a way that goes back and repeats the same scene. Though interstingly it doesn't derail story of the feel of pacing at all. Its not just reving up then jumps into reverse no it repeats a scene only after the thought of one character finishes then goes back and tells you what the other was feeling. Just like a rock climer grabing the next hold then pushing up to see if they can feel the next one after they get used to position.

The thought of rarity being a maid is kind of interesting and her mind set is oppsit of what she normaly is in the show but not different in the way she responds and acts. I could see some people acting the same way but who know I could be wrong.

Spike is in a way in character but it seems as though he is trying to fight something that he can't fight. Dosn't make sense but thats how it is. I don't want to spoil anything so just give it a read and see if you like it I did but hey I like the idea of examining the phycological mind of characters.

well done and I will enjoy reading the rest of the siries when they are compelted.

8/10

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